drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » InsideCorrosion - Carlitos Way InsideCorrosion - Carlitos Way Author Post InsideCorrosion Producer Registration Date: 07-05-2011 Posts: 33 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Carlitos Way' and post your comments here! A Tune I'm working on at the moment amoungst others. Not finished yet but looking for feed back please thanks guys. This track has been deleted on the producer's request 07-05-2011 21:52 freddy reeks break yo self foooo Registration Date: 10-02-2010 Posts: 145 Helpfulness rating:  Really like the b line at drop and thruout, Intro seems a little simple but fits the theme of trak well, beats seem a little simple 2 but u did say u was still workin on it. Structer is great. I really like it!!! 08-05-2011 16:38 InsideCorrosion Producer Registration Date: 07-05-2011 Posts: 33 Helpfulness rating:  cheers mate thanks for checkin it out 08-05-2011 16:42 mattyb Cool Producer Registration Date: 20-05-2010 Posts: 136 Helpfulness rating:  Intro is nice and uplifting but sad at the same time. I think it needs some more sweeps in there. Kick is nice and punchy but the snare needs a little work. Seems to get lost in there. I have the same problem with snares. Right before the drop when it cuts out add some delay to the pad and let it ring out before the snare hit. Also add t he "Go" as the same time as the snare. Bass is KILLER I really dig it. Drop is huuuuge. The amen could be brought up a bit. Definately like how the bassline changes halfway through, it helps it move along. The beat was changed up too which also helps. Over all I'm definately digging it and would play it out. 08-05-2011 17:21 InsideCorrosion Producer Registration Date: 07-05-2011 Posts: 33 Helpfulness rating:  Cheers for checkin it out matt, I will def consider what you said and see if I can improve on it thanks for your input dude big ups. 08-05-2011 17:24 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  The tune sounds a bit panned to the left. Like the bit of silence before the drop (silence is an instrument too remember). The bass sounds really muddy, which is not a good thing. You need to take it down a bit in the 250-800Hz area. Nicely crafted tune otherwise. I can hear you didn't just start doing this. I don't like the balanced kick-snare-kick-snare drum pattern towards the end. Sounds like Boogie or something. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 08-05-2011 19:16 Spectral Pace Cool Producer Registration Date: 19-09-2009 Posts: 219 Helpfulness rating:  Cool intro. Love the thud of your kick, snare is good also. Like the drop. It sounds like you have used a variation of 'Brutal Electro' from NI Massive which is cool. A lot of producers are using this sound which is a bummer. Try modifying it, then saving it as a new sound, then going back to the original sound and repeating the same process. Give yourself half an hour and you'll probably end up with three or four variations. If one is good, then that's half an hour well spent. Good luck. 09-05-2011 13:40 InsideCorrosion Producer Registration Date: 07-05-2011 Posts: 33 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks Pace, Yeah your right its a variation of brutal electro, a little lazy on my part but it seemed to fit ok. I m probably not gonna work on this track anymore as I ve got a bit fedup with it. But will keep your comments in mind for the future cheers mate big ups. 10-05-2011 18:58 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  Nice bass engineering, snare is little bit too hard compressed i think, but nicely shaped track, just mixdown needs little work, sound are awesome rspct __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 10-05-2011 21:13 InsideCorrosion Producer Registration Date: 07-05-2011 Posts: 33 Helpfulness rating:  Tryptech thans for checkin it out mate 13-05-2011 08:17 gripz Cool Producer Registration Date: 16-11-2002 Posts: 138 Helpfulness rating:  I <3the intro, sounds very vangelis. the beat sounds very typical, i would make a beat with other samples for the intro. the drops works great tho , it reminds me of dilinja drops. it's also the reason why i think ur beat samples work after the drop. tho maybe u could fancy up ur beat roll's a bit and power down ur snare a bit . And maybe add a sample from the movie. http://youtu.be/f7Jw2F77GCI i think u can get some real gems out of that movie. 13-05-2011 11:44 InsideCorrosion Producer Registration Date: 07-05-2011 Posts: 33 Helpfulness rating:  whats up man? thanks for checking out the tune, yeah it needs some tweaking here and there and some more variation in every area, I plan on doing some more work soon and will get some film samples in there too thanks for your input dude big ups 13-05-2011 11:58 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » InsideCorrosion - Carlitos Way