It sounds as if you let white noise run in the drums? It takes out the hi end.
Your glitches are a bit repetitive, please edit them some more.
Good start, you got the basics for this style going. Now give the tune your own identity... you don't want to work really hard on this to sound just like someone else or?
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Awesome atmosphere for intro, but i think the reverb kick would be better less... you could use another kick reverb but dont low filter it so much maybe a bandpass? but its up to you i guess
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Like the structure, and the distorted bass sounds really good. Sounds like you've used just the right amount of delay and reverb on it. I would work on the kick and snare to make them sound fatter and more driving in the mix. All the best.
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0.30 interesting intro and nicely put together and builds tension nicely.
1.25 The noisia type synth lead line is very nice, but I m still waiting fo some low end sub bass to kick in? The only time I really hear what I m looking for is at the 1.40 mark but its in the form of a kick sub drop and soon after this the tune finishes.
which leaves me a bit confused as to whether the sub bass was left out intentially or you didnt realise its inaudible?
Its hard to sum this tune up A. Becasue its very short and B. It doesnt seem to have a bassline. Synth line, yeah and some, butno 'Bass'. Good news is both of those issues can be addressed easily so I'll look forward to hearing this in the future
A solid starting point for something that has alot of potential mate big ups.
I think the drums need to be louder and the snare needs more of a crack but other than that it's great. Awesome intro and build up. I think the drop needs to be pronounced though. it seems to stumble in. I would through in a beat of silence to let the delay ring out then drop it in hard. Overall super job.