drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » eurk0 - La Vie D'un Papillon eurk0 - La Vie D'un Papillon Author Post eurk0 Producer Registration Date: 28-05-2008 Posts: 64 Please check out my new track 'La Vie D'un Papillon' and post your comments here! This time something quite different (at least for me ). Brighter melodic tune. Looking forward to see your opinions guys. Much appreciated. anyway, hope you enjoy __ http://soundcloud.com/eurk0 25-04-2011 16:58 c_ctrl Wicked Producer Registration Date: 02-06-2008 Posts: 307 Helpfulness rating:  Liking the melodic elements in the track, they really stand out. Not sure if the bass and beats work with them tho, they sound like two different tunes in places. When compared to the melody over the top. The b-line is nice and subby tho, and the beats are nicely processed, snare sounds a little squashed but all good. Think a bit more could be done with structure, it's fairly repetative. Like parts v much mate, nice one! __ DeCode & Roary Soundcloud 25-04-2011 18:47 Impact Wicked Producer Registration Date: 29-08-2010 Posts: 439 Helpfulness rating:  ez man, I really enjoyed listning to this.. laid back and interesting. Some of the 'bubbly' pads seem a bit out of control now and again.. like they almost destroy the melody you are trying to build.. Bass it deep and tight. Structure wise its a little light on the pacing- but probably a matter of taste. Good work! Your Mix sounds good to me thru my monitors. __ Quality DNB clothing Co founder of Instinct Audio ImpactMastering: Affordable Digital Mastering/Mixing service 25-04-2011 19:31 doolhoofd discobol Registration Date: 02-03-2011 Posts: 324 Helpfulness rating:  Great work on the melodies. And on everything else. Nice track. Very butterfly-ish. __ .:::GENERATIONS PASS:::. .:::CIVILISATIONS DIE:::. .:::THE BLiNK OF AN EYE:::. .:::IN GALACTIC TIME:::. 25-04-2011 21:00 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Bleeps go slightly off tone at some points with the intro chords and later on with other elements. Snare is a bit average, would have loved a short punchy liquid-style snare instead. It sounds to me like the snare is not part of the track. Love what you did, it is fresh. The bass sounds a bit neuro/dark compared to the rest as well. With a bit of fixing this could be a top tune! __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 26-04-2011 12:14 eurk0 Producer Registration Date: 28-05-2008 Posts: 64 thank u all guys. i hear the mistakes now battledrone: u r right, i should remake this. the bass IS dark for it a the bleep really isnt good damn i knew it. i suppose i needed to hear it from someone else :X __ http://soundcloud.com/eurk0 26-04-2011 13:09 krimmie2 Producer Registration Date: 25-04-2011 Posts: 56 Very melodic tune. Not a fan of the bleeps in the build up, also a bit off tune like said before. Also, try to give the bass a more warm and soft feeling, it sounds a bit chubby if you know what I mean. As for the drums & the melody, excellent work! __ >> N-GIN SOUNDCLOUD<< 26-04-2011 14:05 doolhoofd discobol Registration Date: 02-03-2011 Posts: 324 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by BattleDrone Snare is a bit average, would have loved a short punchy liquid-style snare instead. It sounds to me like the snare is not part of the track. I like the snare, it has a grainy, almost distorted, retro feel to it; it might lack a little punch when compared to other snares but that adds to the mellow butterflyish atmosphere of the song... ...but, that's just my opinion; I'm sure BattleDrone has heard a lot more snares than me; if I were you I'd know whose advice I'd take... __ .:::GENERATIONS PASS:::. .:::CIVILISATIONS DIE:::. .:::THE BLiNK OF AN EYE:::. .:::IN GALACTIC TIME:::. 26-04-2011 20:29 doolhoofd discobol Registration Date: 02-03-2011 Posts: 324 Helpfulness rating:  (mine of course, who cares what BattleDrone thinks ) __ .:::GENERATIONS PASS:::. .:::CIVILISATIONS DIE:::. .:::THE BLiNK OF AN EYE:::. .:::IN GALACTIC TIME:::. 27-04-2011 17:10 Spectral Pace Cool Producer Registration Date: 19-09-2009 Posts: 219 Helpfulness rating:  Like the glitches. Reminds me of Lomax Avon Calling. The rest of the build-up doesn't really suit the glitches - the glitches have more of a sinister vibe to them and the other build-up / pad sounds you have are more atmospheric / chilled. Can feel the sub when the drop comes, but the sub has no mid-bass character and it feels like there is a big hole in the mix where that mid-bass should be. It doesn't have to be distorted, just something to fill that gap. All the best. 27-04-2011 18:04 tryptech Tryptech Registration Date: 16-08-2006 Posts: 853 Helpfulness rating:  Very special style youre introducing here,i like tehe mixdown, though mybe little too mcuh goin on in the main part. Drums are tight, sub too rspct __ ANALOGUE (Tryptech) 30-04-2011 16:22 xeroderman Newbie Registration Date: 03-02-2009 Posts: 5 i'm not a fan of basic drum n' bass . but your track is awesome excellent melo , drum and mix __ http://soundcloud.com/xeroderman 01-05-2011 20:08 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » eurk0 - La Vie D'un Papillon