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Like i said that i will upload this tune on the site. Master on this tune isn't finished yet. On master works Andrejnalin or better know as Muad'Dib on this site.
Feedbacks are more that welcomed, and pls be honest
Big ups!
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the halftime drums at the start are sick
your orchestral synth / samples are superb in quality. where did you get them?
i think the bass needs to be a bit higher in the mix, and maybe brought in earlier, also you dont make a very big deal of the bass coming in. when the bass comes in it doesnt last very long before the break either :|
the drums could have a bit more variation
the section of the break without drums goes on a bit too long for my liking, it seemed liek it was going to drop much earlier.
the 2nd drop is much better than the 1st it sounded really good, although you got my hopes up, it seemed like you were going to shuffle the beat up, but then you didnt, but then you just did! i think you should shuffle it up even more than you have, that shit sounds cool.
i think the track could maybe be complemented with a synth of some vareity (reece lol)
also i definitely didnt expect a liquid/Idnb track when i read the name!
anyway, nice work, i think this track has great potential. - bit of a long rambling review but i just cannot bare to look at this lab report any longer.
Originally posted by timmehhurts
some very cool ideas in this track
the halftime drums at the start are sick
your orchestral synth / samples are superb in quality. where did you get them?
i think the bass needs to be a bit higher in the mix, and maybe brought in earlier, also you dont make a very big deal of the bass coming in. when the bass comes in it doesnt last very long before the break either :|
the drums could have a bit more variation
the section of the break without drums goes on a bit too long for my liking, it seemed liek it was going to drop much earlier.
the 2nd drop is much better than the 1st it sounded really good, although you got my hopes up, it seemed like you were going to shuffle the beat up, but then you didnt, but then you just did! i think you should shuffle it up even more than you have, that shit sounds cool.
i think the track could maybe be complemented with a synth of some vareity (reece lol)
also i definitely didnt expect a liquid/Idnb track when i read the name!
anyway, nice work, i think this track has great potential. - bit of a long rambling review but i just cannot bare to look at this lab report any longer.
ps. it could benefit from some FX :p
Thank you mate, i used edirol orchestral vst for strings and violins, for piano i used Fl Key, for Choir used Magnus Choir. I don't like to use samples
Well i don't like bass to be main in this tune. Also i wan't this tune to be Classical with Drums and bass ( DnB )
Thats way i don't want to add fx and reece
Any way thank you mate i really appreciate it!
Nice intro. Sort of standard late nineties Hip-Hop for a while there. 1:10 Like the new drums coming in, but where's the bass? 01:57 Bass comes in, a bit low in the mix, doesn't really rumble much. 2:36 nice ambience, but it goes on for a bit long. 4:26 Starts again nicely but I was sort of expecting after such a long buildup.
As it is it's a bit bare I think. It could perfectly well be an instrumental for a rapper to rap over, maybe it is? That would change everything. Melodies are nice, and stringsounds are nice. Don't really feel the bass though, it's too low, too anonymous and it has no melody of it's own, just follows the strings, and a bit to hecitcally too. Maybe do long notes, with a bunch of distortion and then lo-pass or something? just a suggestion.
I love the orchestral synths. The kicks in the beginning and the intro are very good but the bass should come at around 1:09 imho. As stated above it really sounds like it's too low in the mix(it could use some more distortion also).
The second drop is awesome. The drums are very good(could use more shuffle tho).
But i think the tune is kinda repetative. More variation won't hurt. And you could use some sweeps, wooshes etc.(to build more tension before the drops)
Peace.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by underspawn: 25-04-2011 16:55.
nice track
original feel to it. but i cant help it, i'm lacking bass ;/ maybe its my speakers. but i like the musical stuff there, so keep it up
oh and.. the breakdown is maybe little too long
Unorthadox orchestral style, I'm liking it but think it needs a little more work to sit nicely in the mix against a DnB beat! Think the drums could do with a few more edits and change ups and there's definitely not enough bass or sub! Nice work mate
The strings sound a little too distant - too much reverb. Also there is a duff note towards the end of the string sequence - a little out of key. I'm assuming its MIDI playing through a synth / sampler? The beat is OK although it lacks punch and power. No real rumble with any sub or bass that I can feel. Pad sections get a bit boring after a while - you need a bit of variation - maybe switch things up or throw something else in to keep it interesting. All the best.
Thats way i don't want to add fx and reece 
oh and.. the breakdown is maybe little too long
