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shir_pan
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22-04-2011 19:38 |
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Awesome tune.
I'm thinking the kick and snare sound a bit too alike. Instead of a kick and a snare, drums, it's like I'm just hearing two different pitched popping noises.
Everything else is top notch. Bravo.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by JumplnTheFire: 24-04-2011 04:52.
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23-04-2011 06:33 |
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BattleDrone 
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Snare sounds too thin.
Bassline sounds like a rock tune, not like DnB
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23-04-2011 20:29 |
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eurk0
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the bass started quite soon. and didnt really do much. i would wait with it till it drops. after the drop, the bass is still not enough for me. it just doesnt carry the track. other parts are ok. maybe some notes i dont get, but i could be just me ;] i would work on that bass. gl with it
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25-04-2011 17:03 |
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c_ctrl
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I like the sound of the plucks and the mallet sounds. The drums are quite thin sounding, with the kick and the snare not distinguishable enough, layer them up? The bassline is promising, it's got a certain drive to it which I like. Same with the beats, but they sound clicky and programmed instead of rolling. Could be a big track with some work!
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25-04-2011 18:41 |
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Impact
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ez dude.
Kick is a little lightweight.
Snare is a bit tame too.. needs more SNAP
intro Melody is ok..
Bassline reminds me of pendulum.. not in a good or bad way- jus sayin
main melody sounds very monophonic.. have you tried upping the number of voices to give it more depth and presence?
Drums- the attack and release is too short- its cutting your hits off too early making the drums sound extremely robotic..
Strings need more warmth and 'depth' too.
A solid idea bro- but needs some work to make it really shine 
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25-04-2011 19:37 |
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shir_pan
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thx for the reviews! i think ill work on it some more...
@Impact: thanks a lot for your suggestions, helps me alot!
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25-04-2011 21:37 |
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gripz
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this could be a very nice tune.
it just need a bit of work
the samples or notes on 3:20 and at 6:40 r totaly out of key with the rest of the track definitely pitch them 2 a propper key.
i think ur anser in many cases is layering.
ur beat will defently gain alot from this.
However this could be great for ur bass aswell.
play around using a sub only instrument and another where u take away any sub or even bass frequencies and adding those together.
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26-04-2011 02:34 |
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krimmie2
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Hello,
Work on your drums mate, your snare needs much more power. The kick is too thin , make it pound more. And raise the release of your hats, it won't make them sound so twitchy.
Your bass has a very filled warm feeling. Don't care if it's not a bass suitable for drum & bass. I do like your build up structure alot.
The melody is nice, but I have the feeling at the end of the 8 bars your turning the vibe down again. So try & change it if you want to make it work on people (maybe some people will disagree with me)
Just keep practicing bro!
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26-04-2011 16:32 |
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Spectral Pace
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Good build-up. Tune is OK. Sounds a little timid. I'm not really getting that much sub from my Dynaudio BM5A's - seems the track needs more low end power. Snare could be slightly crispier / snappier. Like the multitude of sounds you have used. The delays sound cool.
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27-04-2011 18:53 |
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analysiss
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nice tune matecant believe it aint got more stars id probaly try and bring the bass out more myself but then im listenin on a laptop so il leave that for others to judge.BIG up mate keep them coming!!
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28-04-2011 17:22 |
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shir_pan
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03-05-2011 12:49 |
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Nice tune, just lacks a bit of loudness. Feeling the vibe with the marimba style and synth melodies
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16-05-2011 21:48 |
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shir_pan
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