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gripz 
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Please check out my new track 'Evolution' and post your comments here!
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17-04-2011 16:36 |
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Spectral Pace
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Good moody vibe. Tune just sounds a bit timid. I'd try boosting the velocity of your MIDI in most parts (if you haven't already done so) to get the sounds as attacking as they can be. Then maybe try some gating on individual elements to make them pump. Kick and snare could benefit from more level in the mix also. All the best.
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18-04-2011 11:51 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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19-04-2011 14:08 |
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shir_pan
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imo the drums could go better with some more snap (especially the kick) and turning down the hats a little, nice drum-programming though, melodies sound ok, get a little repetetive after a while though, maybe try adding some "non-padish" elements to it, track has potential for a nice liquid-tune 
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22-04-2011 16:54 |
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The hats are turned up too loud and the kick could use a bit more punch and presence. Other then that drum programming is awesome.
It sounds a slight bit bare/hollow. Add a couple more effects here in there to spice it up and give it some life you're good to go!
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23-04-2011 06:51 |
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gripz
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After all ur much appreciated replies 
,i'v been hard at it.
this tune was a few weeks old when i posted it and when i went back 2 look at it again i noticed the project didn't have any mastering on it just a bare mix with some pre master fx.
I do wonder how i go about uploading/posting the same track but cleaned up.
R there any rules on how 2 do this?
tx again for the replies
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23-04-2011 16:15 |
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csel
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Nice soundscape intro... the chinca crash needs to go i IMO... Build up needs to be improve,
Nice bass sound, i like it, maybe you could adjust the reverb a bit... make it more subtle and move it front a bit
2:55 stops me writing for a moment... maybe i just love trance 
Good one
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02-05-2011 11:12 |
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gripz
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tx for ur reply m8.
if u like the track, i uploaded a newer version recently it should be around here somewhere in the tunes section.
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02-05-2011 15:50 |
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