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Noisebound Noisebound is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!


Hey people, I started working on a new track today, it has no intro or outro, just the main idea. I would like to hear some opinions and advices to change some things on the early stages.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Noisebound: 17-04-2011 15:08.
17-04-2011 15:06
gripz gripz is a male
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nc summer vibe ^^

dunno if this is ur cup of tea but maybe add some gated synth in 2 add drive. I think it would go well with ur snappy beat.
17-04-2011 16:50
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Melody = childish & gets annoying after few seconds

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Melody sound like in house music ( which is not bad) U should make more variations, also add some high and low fx. Make more variations in drums. Mote hats and stronger snare. Any way u have better tunes, but with little work this will be with same quality as others Smile
Big ups and keep working Smile
18-04-2011 07:05 Homepage of Glodaragz
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Like the vibe straight away. If I were you, I would split the structure up into 16 bar sections and spend an hour on each one (trying something different for each one). Make sure you keep to the same key so the parts can be used together if you like. This way you can pick and choose the best bits, or the tune might take you off in a different direction. Good luck.
18-04-2011 11:56
Noisebound Noisebound is a male
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Thanks for the reviews. I removed the synth and now track sounds a lot better. Also changed the beat. Got to add some more elements because now it sounds a little bit empty. I'll post it here as soon as I finish it. Again cheers for the feedback.

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18-04-2011 18:18
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Sounds really viable to me mate.

Keys are a bit repetitive, need a little change up mate.

Other than that mix is good and sounds quite pro, good ideas there, def needs finished.

Lil summer vibe to this.
18-04-2011 21:38
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Pretty! Makes me think of the 80's for some reason. Very catchy melody, and the mix is good. Not sure what else to say.

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