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Paracyte 
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Please check out my new track 'Believe' and post your comments here!
HI all DNB.BE heads,
A fresh one from me, comments and suggestions as always appreciated !
Enjoy !
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14-04-2011 18:38 |
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analysiss
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nice track mate!! the vocal works well, nice gritty growlin sounds always good! yeah sum nice vibes on this. Big up mate i would defo drop this!!
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14-04-2011 19:03 |
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doolhoofd
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* Vocals, yeah... I don't like 'em. Especially the 'I can't stop', sounds wrong to me. Matter of taste I guess
* Good work on the beat (kick + snare), the basses & the hihats
* Sounds empty, definitely needs some more elements added
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14-04-2011 19:31 |
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Paracyte
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@analysiss - cheers mate glad you like it,
@doolhoofd - Cheers for the review mate, I tryied to add some lines but believe me it sounds worse the if it is empty, might work some more on that.
Cheers!
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14-04-2011 19:53 |
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BattleDrone
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Not sure about this one... nice atmosphere & all, but it needs more action. The bassline isn't going anywhere.
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14-04-2011 23:12 |
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Paracyte
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Hi Battle,
I agree it's fairly minimalistic,
Thanks for review !
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14-04-2011 23:23 |
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pusha
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great track my only gripe would be intro a little bit long with not a lot going on would be great if shortened a bit other than that really sick track big up mate
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15-04-2011 09:56 |
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Paracyte
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15-04-2011 20:40 |
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Pytchlocka
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Intro is nice with the atmosphere, maybe a bit too long, you could add a few more sounds to keep it more interesting. Drop is good, sounds just a bit empty but that's what you were going for I'm assuming. That reese that comes in a bit later is pretty sick. Drums could definitely hit a just bit harder.. Maybe invest in a better snare with more beef unless you're trying to keep it more minimall like the way you have it now. It would be cool to here some more sounds in the first drop like a melody or a synth line or something.. but over all pretty cool tune.
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16-04-2011 18:38 |
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Spectral Pace
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Hey Paracyte. Tune sounds OK. Some elements are very timid and thin. Try widening the drums a bit and seperating the percussion out to the left and right a little more. Hopefully you'll have a bit more space to thicken up the vocal. Like some of your swishy / paddy elements. Good work.
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18-04-2011 12:11 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Oh man, that intro-melody is nice. Reminds me of RJD2. Not too much of a fan of vocals like that, but I guess that's an issue I have, and not one the song has. Really nice mood to this song. Sounds a bit thin though, could maybe use some more layers of synths/melodies. Not feeling the synth FX on top of the melody.
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19-04-2011 14:41 |
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Paracyte
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Cheers guys.
Ill take all suggestions in consideration
Thanks for feedback.
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19-04-2011 16:01 |
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shir_pan
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great athmosphere in the intro, nice vocals! like the beat, can imagine some pads in there would sound great. nice distorted bass in the 2nd minute. track sounds little monotonous after a while, imo some more elements would do it good, maybe some more heavy drums too... nice track, cheers
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22-04-2011 17:40 |
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Wicked tune! Percussion is great, nice and punchy.
It sounds a bit empty to me. Maybe another pad would be nice
The riff that comes in around 1:50 is really annoying. It's all over the place.
Personally I love the vocals and think they fit perfectly.
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23-04-2011 06:20 |
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Dub Bananez
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-I agree with the others, the vocals are not fitting so well, maybe turn it down and use it more has a far off in the distance type vocal
-Drumz are ok, can use some work, kick is a little muffled
-like the dist bass fx sounds
-like the mellody
-This tune can use a little love still
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24-04-2011 11:38 |
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Paracyte
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