shir_pan - Liquid Brain

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shir_pan - Liquid Brain

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shir_pan
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Liquid Brain' and post your comments here!

Probably the finished version of a tune i put on here a while ago...any feedback appreciated Smile

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12-04-2011 16:25

timmehhurts timmehhurts is a male

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the very start is very nice, the hats could be lower in the mix imo

i love the bassline and from 1:29 the track really finds its pace. not sure im sold on the wobble lead earlier in the track though.

the breakdown is really smooth

for the most part the mix is really good but the kick drum could have a bit more bass end to it.

overall the track is very listenable. and that atmospheric outro is a nice touch

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by timmehhurts: 12-04-2011 17:24.

12-04-2011 17:23

Impact
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ez man..
typing as i listen:

lead synth is cool- like the quieter synth underneath that builds to 25seconds..

wobble riff at starting @ 43 secs sounds a little offkey to me?

1:30 is really nice Smile

great imaging!

The drums are ok, a little robotic and clinical sounding- but i guess it fits your vibe..

Like the halftime section @2:40
Bass is strong without being overpowering
Good drum roll into the next phrase @2:50

Yeah man- a pretty sweet tune! Good work!

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14-04-2011 10:54

pusha
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nice track mate think structure layout is grat some of the bass sounds could do with tweaking a bit that lfo'd square sound could do with a bit of tightening up to make it sound a little less flabby ,

but then some times i hear it and it does sound tight maybe being played in lower key thats not working

drums are nice and tight although a little generic sounding on the breaks

nice track overall mate best one i heard from ya so far
what program u use mate ?

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15-04-2011 09:53

BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male

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Good tune, not much to nag about.
Suggestions to make it better:
- Give it a dirty edge, it sounds quite clean.
- Aim more on the dancefloor as you are close to it anyway.
- Instruments are quite "middle of the road" go for some more risky sounds.

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15-04-2011 14:57

den_bert
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Lead sound before 1.18 sounds very 'plastic' to me, I would try to make it sound warmer. Break is very nice. Drums are a little generic, I suggest adding some more layers and some more beef to your kick and snare. Overall mix is nice, good job.

15-04-2011 18:49

shir_pan
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thx for reviews, really help me getting better Wink

@pusha: im using fl studio 8

@battledrone: thx for the suggestions, appreciated

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20-04-2011 18:33

SKINLEY
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Great track man, particularly the second drop. The kick and snare were at a nice level and had a nice punch. The only thing that I found was losing track of the melody? it was quite random with no real hook? Still a sick tune, fair play.

16-05-2011 21:55

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