Originally posted by recon47
Melodies dont work pal.
Second that.
The string-like sound starting 01.11 is too weak to justify the buildup 01.36. It just sounds lame as fuck & the other melody is cheezy as well. That & too much repetition. Not to mention phazer fx suck pretty bad
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missin some elements like pads or smth in the intro. synth-melody entering at .33 lacks some originality and charachter imo. also missin any kind of subbass. drums dont sound too bad, but im not in love at all with those melodies. try to put some more variation in this tune, try adding more athmosphere and fx...cheers
Your intro percussion is too hi-passed. Maybe have a pad underneath it before the beat comes in. Snare doesn't really work that well. Your two melodies don't sit well together at all. Keep pushing though. All the best.
The melody during the buildup is lacking, the notes just don't go with each other. Well, most of it is alright, i would recommend changing the 6th and 7th notes in that melody. The snare is not too good, try to find a snare that is a bit more punchy. The song is a bit repetitive try changing it up a bit by adding a pad or some fx. goodluck
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by JacksonP: 24-04-2011 06:37.
