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Subkinetik 
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Registration Date: 24-04-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Bordon Beauty' and post your comments here!
Work in progress.
Produced on just Reason 5
Unfinished
Got as far as this with this tune then writers block kicked in so would like some ideas on where to take this track next.
For the impatient people out there wait till about 2 minutes in and it switches up from 'calm' dubstep to 'dirty' dubstep
Also thinking to put some vocals in there to turn it into a mix but not sure whos voice/song would fit the eq/notes. any ideas? might just leave it out if not.
Let the comments flow 
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05-04-2011 02:30 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Well made, very clean mixdown.
I like the dirty part a lot. The first 2 minutes are boring compared to the dirty part.
Especially the intro sounded to me like a saloon piano at first. Maybe you could add more mystery and darkness to that instrument because it doesn't work as a teaser.
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05-04-2011 12:11 |
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alternate force
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Registration Date: 23-01-2009
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love that first drop mate
.. nice track .. like it .. i think the second drop is good but i think it could do with some nice heavy sub stabs .. howed u get the first drop bass to sound like that ?? .. could u give me the patch , i would appreciate it
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05-04-2011 19:09 |
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recon47
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Registration Date: 05-01-2009
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Excellent work mate! I'd be super proud if it was mine.
Snare is wicked, just the right amount of tail on it for me.
Kick could do with a little extra smack if you ask me.
Lots of variation and suspense, loving the DIRTY section.
Label bizzness for sure!
Honestly, really well produced!
Could fit some sort of spacey delayed female vocal
in there and would sound sick.
Nuff said!
Well done man.
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05-04-2011 19:32 |
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doolhoofd
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just don't like dubstep at all. sorry
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06-04-2011 01:56 |
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Spectral Pace
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Like the arrangement and the tonality of the sounds you have used. Like the 'dirty' part althought the LFO is jarring on my head a little bit. Definitely try some vocals on this one. Experiment! Try a few different things out. All the best.
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06-04-2011 17:54 |
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ulli
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Registration Date: 06-04-2011
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yoooooooooo wicked wicked sound really nice dubstep sound. nice intro verry verry nice whobbels you use. i think you have to put a vocal just before you switch from calm dubstep to drity dubstep or try to find soms nice vocal for your intro somthing like borgore if you know his music try to make your intro a little bit longer and put some little rap vocal in your intro. its just a idea you can try it maybe it will work but go on your sound are verry verry wicked. play this song on a party and people will freak out :p verry nice
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07-04-2011 10:52 |
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shir_pan
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very clear sound, really like the wobblebass in the intro, sounds awesome. nice melodies too, they do well with each other. not really in love with the "dirty" part, too aggressive wobble for me, but thats a question of taste. impressive tune, respect!
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08-04-2011 15:04 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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THanks for review mate.
Nice melodies mate. NOt really my sort of thing, but it does sound nice...
Mastering sounds nice mate. Could do with a bit more sub though =]
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11-04-2011 04:50 |
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Dub Bananez
Dub Bananez
Registration Date: 06-10-2010
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Intro can use a little more developement. Like the bass synth. Sounds used are good, the piano gets a bit repeatitive. Like the build to the drop, nice synth work. Drumz go well with the synth. Nice tune.
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