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shir_pan
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Another Science' and post your comments here!
a project im currently working on, any feedback, suggestions & opinions are appreciated 
cheers
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01-04-2011 16:45 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
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Not bad, the occasional note that slipped outside the lanes isn't all that much of a problem but fixing would be good.
Tune could be more exciting with some more different bass hits, some more exciting drums and some FX, a little vocal bit,... But you prove to have some talent and you make a nice structure.
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01-04-2011 21:26 |
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Spectral Pace
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Like the beat. Tune has got quite a sinister vibe to it. The pads and FX work well with the arrangement. Good work.
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02-04-2011 13:26 |
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brucifer
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Hi mate, thanks for the review.
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NIce intro. Think you could do with letting a bit more of the lower frequencies into you synths. Tune is very middle ranged.
Nice melodies mate.
Enjoyed
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11-04-2011 04:45 |
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shir_pan
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thx the reviews, ill keep workin on it 
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Originally posted by brucifer
Think you could do with letting a bit more of the lower frequencies into you synths. Tune is very middle ranged.
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thanks for this, definitely true
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11-04-2011 20:58 |
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Pytchlocka
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I like the melodies you have going around. The drums could really use a bit of work. The kick needs more low end and the snare could use maybe a bit more mid range. I like the voxx sounds you used. Also the buildup could maybe be a bit bigger to get things going. Also a bit more sub, this tune could benefit from it. Keep working on it though, good start!
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