 BBear - Make My Day ( Wip) |
BBear 
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Registration Date: 18-08-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Make My Day ( Wip)' and post your comments here!
My first upload here, hoeray!
Made with FL studio 9.
Used 3xosc for the sub, Massive for Bass.
I could realy use some comments on this one. Probably one of the best things I have made yet but far from great obviously. All feedback much appreciated!
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28-03-2011 20:29 |
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recon47
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Registration Date: 05-01-2009
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Nice track man! some good ideas here.
However,levels are too loud dude and are drowning out the beat and the freqs are fighting for space.
Make room for everything firstly by pulling the levels to zero and putting the kik/snr to where they need to be and then mixing in the low end untill is right.
After that bring in all elements one by one so that there all audiable,also lw cut everything thats not acting as a bass part.
No offence man its a good tune just needs some tweaking and your there.
Cheers!
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28-03-2011 21:12 |
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Spectral Pace
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Registration Date: 19-09-2009
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Hey BBear, welcome to the site. I would make your main melody more complex as currently it just keeps repeating over and over. Also the Fruity Limiter is really kicking in and giving the tune a really 'squashed' kind of sound. Try lowering your main output and raising the ceiling on the Fruity Limiter.
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28-03-2011 21:34 |
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shir_pan
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like the idea of the tune, on my speakers the drums sound pretty much in the back-ground, bring them up a little (especially kick&snare), the "distortion-element" entering at ~2.15 is kindof confusing me, missin some more variation in the drums, tune has great jump-up-potential!!
cheers
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http://soundcloud.com/shirpan
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29-03-2011 13:27 |
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tryptech
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Sounds very clear, just turn down the volume on the master a little, drums are tight, bass is nice too, but can be more twisted, love the energy on this one
rspct
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29-03-2011 15:08 |
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BBear
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Registration Date: 18-08-2010
Posts: 44
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Thanks for the comments, much appreciated!
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02-04-2011 12:29 |
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