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Spectral Pace
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Registration Date: 19-09-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Mercury' and post your comments here!
Hey Guys.
Took into account what people were saying and have added an intro as well as tweaked some parts of the arrangement.
It's still a WIP, so any ideas / feedback will be greatly appreciated.
One love.
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23-03-2011 12:17 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
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Intro is very good, interesting, good tension building. Drop needs variation (some Fx or something) to keep it going, near the end of the clip it has become very repetitive.
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23-03-2011 21:29 |
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noosesone
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this is dope man ...i can race to this ...
you have a danny byrd feel to ya..
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23-03-2011 23:08 |
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pusha
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this is soundin good one thing that i would also add that would make that bass even sicker is rather than havin ur notes with no release on them have them on glide so the sound sort of well glides up and down lol also automate the lfo to go faster and slower while its doing that i think it would sound propper sikk just my opinion tho
not sure the stabs and piano out the dannybird sample pack fit to well with this sort of track or the drum roll out of the sample pack because it dont go with ur main snare any ways nice track mate
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24-03-2011 07:51 |
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stickbubbly
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slid tune. intro is nice and deep with lots of cool effects goin on.
great build into the drop.
really nice lead noises. heavy kick and snare.
tends to get a bit repetitive , but still really enjoyable.
nice one bro
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24-03-2011 08:47 |
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Spectral Pace
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Cheers for review guys.
Pusha: Cheers bruv. Yeah, used a few sounds from Danny Byrd's samplepack. Have got something in mind to replace that piano section, just wanted to get it up to see what people thought. Safe
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24-03-2011 11:58 |
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bm84
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drums sound thumpin in this one, not my usual style of dnb i listen to but its well produced. think a bit more variation is needed in the track to keep the interest, even just a little sample or something every 4 or 8 bars would do the trick
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24-03-2011 19:14 |
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tryptech
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Nice intro sounds, love the bass on this one, drums are tight as ussual, you've got talent man, love that stabs around 50, you should do a lot more with them, that bass is sick as hell, very good track man, really sounds very pro
rpsct couldnt do it better myself
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24-03-2011 21:27 |
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dLO
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This is bangin. Intro set up nicely for a big drop! Sick bass sounds. I can take / leave that repetitive one-note piano sample. Also, I'd think about layering some more hats or something in the break to give it more dynamics - right now it sounds kinda thin relative to the smashing bass. Can try some more automation in the bass, but its pretty bad ass right now. You guys sure do make some smashers.
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26-03-2011 03:28 |
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shir_pan
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bassline after drop has power, but i miss the pad-ambience of the intro after the drop, synth in the buildup doesnt really fit in the tune imo, snare is great, i would turn up the sub, nice tune overall, i can feel it, maybe add some pads for ambience in the verse, keep on it!
cheers
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29-03-2011 14:00 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Nice intro bruv. Love the reverse (what ever it is)
Drop is heavy mate, like it.
Needs some more elements though. Tune isn't much more than a loop really
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11-04-2011 05:01 |
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