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timmehhurts timmehhurts is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Do What You Want' and post your comments here!

using vocals from a cleared sample pack this is my latest liquid track and a good one to share with these forums i feel. i want for a much more compressed sound to my previous works, let me know what you think.

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15-03-2011 18:59 Homepage of timmehhurts
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Did you change your name, because I don't know you???
To me this is IDM, not really liquid, it's not something people would go crazy for on the dancefloor. In the breakdown the tune sound very midi-like as those strings sound very artificial. All in all the tune doesn't have a lot of action, too little action for my taste anyway.
Productionwise it is very good, maybe a little too much reverb on the break and in the main parts the strings are pushed away due to heavy compression which isn't helping the sound. This mixdown puts a lot of pressure on the ears, you might want to go a bit easy on the compression mate. The vocal isn't helping a lot, maybe use something else?
Anyway, good tune!

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15-03-2011 20:44 Homepage of BattleDrone
Virtual_Riot Virtual_Riot is a male
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How I love these old movie samples Smile The drumloop is really lovely, the overall sound quality of the strings and the piano could be a little better, only thing I miss is some kind of catchy melody that stays in mind or something like that...and maybe some more tension building Wink But all in all good work Smile Enjoyed listening to it.

PS: The end seems a bit chopped off...is that on purpose?
15-03-2011 21:00 Homepage of Virtual_Riot
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nice track the drums could do with a tad livening up though they are a bit to low end that amen need to shine a bit more keep at it mate

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15-03-2011 22:02
timmehhurts timmehhurts is a male
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Thanks for the feedback,

I dont think i changed my name, my producing name is 'her jade eyes', my username on most things is 'timmehhurts'

Yeah i think the compression might be a bit high on this one and the strings are from a freeware vst called dsk overture, i dont own a viola so im a bit screwed for real samples... i should probably sample my guitars more often

I find it hard to write melodies, i tend to be better at just drums and basslines

And yup i cut off the end sample deliberately

anyway yeah thanks, ill bear it all in mind for future works. Smile

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16-03-2011 00:28 Homepage of timmehhurts
Philthy McNasty Philthy McNasty is a male
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Writing while listening...loving the intro...sets the perfect mood. Amen comes in...you need to clean it up and add some ghost hits, to make it as clear and distinct as the rest of your tune...maybe some fade in and outs....would do it justice. Once it drops sounds much better. Like the bass, but wish it had a lil more umph. Again with the amen....you should stutter step edit it to flow better with the track. Def dig this tho. RespeKt!

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16-03-2011 18:09 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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Stereo image is very good, alls osunds are nice, but dont like the drums too much its too much amen, to less snappieness, that synth is great. piano is really great, would die for that
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17-03-2011 17:16 Homepage of tryptech
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