Great structure! Sexy reverb'd pads.
I think the wobble bass should have a little more character though, it seems hide in the background. dont be afraid to let the wobble show its lead.
Also, consider slowing down the tempo just a tad, like 5 bpm down.
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Nice padwork, but drop is kinda not energetic enough, think the drums have potential, but bassmelody isnt tight enough, oke when that trancy synths comes in, the song has much more soul, i would leave that tiktik taktaktak sound away there just that trancy concordawnish synth fills enough.
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Hey Shir_pan. Really like your intro sounds / build-up. Would bring that hi-hat down a bit to showcase the more synthy elements of the intro. Drop is OK. Try compressing the kick and the snare together at a ratio of between 4-5:1 at an attack of 1-2ms with a release of 400-500ms. Then bring the level up. Just might give the tune an extra bit of 'punch'. Up to you, all the best, Pace.
@DrewTweedyMusic: yea i totally agree on the bass, i gonna try to push it more upfront, though im not so sure how to do that, im more like an experimenter so far
@tryptech: agree on the bass too, im not so sure what you mean by the "tiktik taktak-sound" (maybe this string-like-sound that enters sometimes?)
@DJ Pace: i will try what you suggested and see how it sounds, thx for the tip
loving that snare sound, the kick could be a bit punchier though. in terms of basses the melody is great but the sound could do with a bit of distortion or something to thicken it and the lead parts are cool very eerie, although there are parts where they overlap eachother in the sound a bit too much, i like the little change ups int he drumloop you have going and the build at the start is really cool maybe could do with a nother bandpass on it or some resonance. cant wait to hear it finished.
