 jassummisko - Liquid Emotions |
jassummisko
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Registration Date: 02-01-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Liquid Emotions' and post your comments here!
I KNOW I DIDN'T PUT A SUBBASS. But anyways, I think that this is my best song YET!!! So yeah...Tell me what you think!
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10-03-2011 00:49 |
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BattleDrone 
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Too much reverb, drums are too silent.
Not only is there no subbass, there's no bass at all. But those chords sound fucking great so if you could clean up the mix (the hihat section in your drums is very dirty and distorted) and add some bass this could be a killer tune.
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10-03-2011 11:45 |
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tryptech
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Love the vibe, sub is necessary in this one man, you need a drop for sure, but like the vibe man
rspct
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10-03-2011 12:18 |
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shir_pan
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nice pads, maybe a little too much at them at once at around 50seconds, great snare! id put more variation into those pad-melodies, maybe use some pluck-melody as well, gets repetitive after the 2nd buildup, of course also missin bass, keep workin on it,i like your melodies, this one has potential for a really nice tune,
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11-03-2011 15:34 |
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Spectral Pace
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Hey Jassummisko, Pace here. Like your intro and the pad / fx you have used. Beat sounds nice and punchy. Agree with earlier comments. You need a sub bass element to the track as well as probably a mid-range bass section. Have a go, see what you can come up with.
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13-03-2011 15:21 |
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Impact
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Registration Date: 29-08-2010
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Intro synths are nice 
Nice tones and notes!
Synth bus got reverb on it?
I'd be careful there as it gets pushed back in the mix compared to the drums..
drums sound ok, but a little flat in tone. Snare needs to snap and the hats need to Shimmer.. imo
Arrangement is ok..
Piano elements are well payed but again get lost in the mix and drowned out by the drums..
time to investigate side chaining and sort out a sub and low/mid bass and you should have a decent tune
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