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Impact
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08-03-2011 23:46 |
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BattleDrone
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The pads stuff from the intro has too much lo-end in the drop and there's a bit too much reverb going on. Drums are a tad dry. Not a fan of heavy panning. The toms sound a bit off on the pads, the toms don't fit IMO.
When the vocal came in I ducked because I thought it was going off tone massively (which didn't happen), vocal needs some dressing up as it doesn't glue right now.
The mixdown needs work, you could make things way more shiny, defined and full. Especially the mid basses need warmth IMO.
I get the feeling that this was just a long intro and the drop is waiting round the corner. I'd expect some gully bass elements in the main drop to give it that real DnB feeling.
Very good basic, needs work to get it up to your standards.
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09-03-2011 13:56 |
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Spectral Pace
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Hey Impact. Tune sounds nice. The raw material is very good and works well. The slap bass/double bass notes seem out of key with the rest of the arrangement but otherwise everything seems to gel well. Some sounds seem a bit too wide at present and will need drawing in slightly. Good stuff. Look forward to hearing the finished version!
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09-03-2011 15:51 |
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tryptech
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10-03-2011 13:54 |
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shir_pan
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beautiful melodies, i like your stuff, guitar is awesome!!! nice drumbeat, maybe a little more bass would do good, amazing sound
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11-03-2011 15:24 |
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Puzzle
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Some nice ideas in there man. Liking the double bass action, although you don't really seem to have a key, just lots of different notes playing everywhere haha. Overall this is really messy, you need to rearrange all the elements imo. But it's not a bad place to start
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12-03-2011 00:01 |
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Very groovy, a nice listen, and superb audio quality.
Could work on the structure a bit though. parts seem random and don't come in at ideal times.
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12-03-2011 05:52 |
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Impact
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12-03-2011 17:12 |
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19-03-2011 22:56 |
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