 noosesone - Chicago Skin |
noosesone
Producer
Registration Date: 24-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Chicago Skin' and post your comments here!
yea this is yet another beat from the noose factory.....
just forgive me for the trumpet sounds ...i was to lazy to fix them or take them out...there not the worse just not in sync with the beat.
again my beat is not done....
and is any one going to join the SEBA competition?
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06-03-2011 05:09 |
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eurk0 
Producer
Registration Date: 28-05-2008
Posts: 64
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maybe its just me, but i dont seem to like the firts pad's volume envelope. how it's being cut with no release. but it's personal preference i see. the intro is quite long (i think it's too long for how many few elements are in there). for sometnhing like this it should be more uplifiting, more emotional. anyway where's the bass? 
should have joined by 3:30. i know it's not finished, but cmon. what's a dnb track without bass?
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06-03-2011 12:21 |
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Spectral Pace
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 19-09-2009
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Hey Nooseone, Pace here. A good basis for a tune, but it needs a lot more in it. Can't hear or feel much bass.
Definitely put more in to this tune.
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06-03-2011 14:12 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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Hi Nooseone
As a Pace said, good base for a tune, needs a lot of work, tune proportions are not realy good, first 3 minutes are boring next 2 you add some new elements. you should do that much earlier.
Work on it.
Cheers.
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06-03-2011 22:33 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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It's oke man your improvin with every song you make, jeah the trumpet is too steppy, it nees too swing more, pads are nice, drums may swing more, but good job man, youre gonna get far
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07-03-2011 17:38 |
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