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Spectral Pace
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Registration Date: 19-09-2009
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Hey bone man, Pace here. Like the bass you have used in this tune and the piano sample works really well. Like your use of little samples like the guitar at around 2:49.
Would definitely compress the urban vocals so they are coming through nice and solid.
All the best, Pace
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06-03-2011 14:19 |
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Paracyte 
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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Hi Boneman,
Nice use of vocals, good tune overal.
Need some work on the beat, make it more clear more punchy. Especialy the snare. Some parts when bassline cuts through everything you can hear beat dissapearing.
cheers.
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06-03-2011 22:25 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Not to shabby for some jungle bizzzz. If your gonna come hard like that you have to have waaay more edits. Bass is pretty sick! Sounds like your tune has just a lil too much hi's but the lows are pretty good. Not bad
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07-03-2011 12:52 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Nice bass, but it sometimes feels like more tracks then one, think you do not need that many vocals, mix is oke, needs mastering as you said, around 2.11 thats the shit you should use to make on track.
Respect man
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07-03-2011 17:41 |
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Impact
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Registration Date: 29-08-2010
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ez dude.
Im loving the fact there are all these new (and old) guys come out of nowhere.. so much good music to check out 
I love it!
Liking the old skool jungle feel.. intro made me wait for 'YES YES!' that never came.. 
break needs to be TIGHT for jungle! louder, crisper and more attack like you've done with the later Amen.
Stereo effect on the 'atmos' seems a little overcooked.. rest of it is spot on tho as far as I can hear.
Like the bass breakdown and piano riff
You have some kind of resonant 'ping' around 2.02 thats really too wide/loud for the mix it ruins the vibe for me..
Really like the dub fx and feel later on.. its almost a second MENTAL intro (that I love!) needs CHOPPAGE!
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07-03-2011 20:28 |
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BLoodstain
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Registration Date: 27-03-2009
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Nice sub in the intro. but everything sound like it's in the background? or is this me? My speakers make it okay, but in my headset it sounds in the background, might me me though.
nice drums, can't complain, maybe a bit more high end in the hats,or less mids but nonetheless nice drums.
drums in the intro sound a bit less good.
Talking about the kick
very nice bassline though
melody is nice, has a pretty nice oldskool feeling.
makes me move too, really like it.
could be sweeter, but this is defo a good thing to start with.
no idea to add more,
nice solid track with minor flaws innit,
good work ! ^^
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08-03-2011 19:23 |
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bm84
Bone Man
Registration Date: 14-11-2007
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cheers for all the comments, taken em into consideration....
im completely re-doing the drum parts as they do sound a bit lame and im re-sequencing it so thats its simpler an not so all over the place
nice one!
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12-03-2011 10:23 |
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analysiss
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Registration Date: 02-10-2009
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very quite mate sounds like a mid ninties jungle track which i lap up levels are all over the place address this as this track has potential keep at it bone man big up
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14-03-2011 15:41 |
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doolhoofd
discobol
Registration Date: 02-03-2011
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- well-manufactured beats to start with
- catchy vocals & nice atmospheric sounds
- dig the amen-loop (starting 3.22)
- good climax leading to the amen
- bass is a bit too quiet for my ears
- overall a quite enjoyable, booty-shakin' tune. quality work!
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16-03-2011 23:11 |
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dLO
dannyLO
Registration Date: 29-05-2009
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19-03-2011 22:52 |
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institute
Producer
Registration Date: 02-04-2009
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20-03-2011 11:44 |
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bm84
Bone Man
Registration Date: 14-11-2007
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dannyLO - cheers mate! ive properly finished the track now, changed it a little bit but when ive given it a quick mastering ill send you a copy.....
institute - been using logic 8 for about 2 and a half years now, its a good sequencer. all the vocals i use are samples, sometimes from old reggae tracks aswell as sample packs. would love to work with some mc's sometime but until then......
the break at the start is one i just got on a dnb sample cd with a magazine i bought, its not titled but when i get a minute i can upload it and send it you
need to return the favour and check out some tunes on here, will do very soon!
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22-03-2011 22:15 |
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Impact
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23-03-2011 11:14 |
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bm84
Bone Man
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yeah definitely mate, probably gonna give it a quick master this time an then ill either upload the new version or send you a link to check out.....cheers
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