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shir_pan
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Please check out my new track 'Ithaka' and post your comments here!
i think there is still some work left on this one, maybe you guys have some advice? cheers and thanks for reviewing
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01-03-2011 13:59 |
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Spectral Pace
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Hey Shir_pan, Spectral here. Really like your intro. Like the sound of your distorted bass although I think the rhythm you have used for that part needs looking at again. The snare sounds nice as does the percussion. All the best, Spectral
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01-03-2011 14:46 |
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sevin
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ez man intro is spot on... dont change the rhythm of the bass at all... soundin wicked... just needs quantising a little.... good tune man feelin it
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mummy!! i made a song!! if i press this note.... and this one.... and this one....... and add these drums (click)and this funny bass sound (click)....
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01-03-2011 20:30 |
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Impact
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ez man,
intro is interesting.. some great textures.. waves works well 
like the synths
break is a little light in the kick drum dept on my monitors (yamaha hs80's)
bass is also a little light..
bass stabs seem a little quiet in the mix imho.
bass itself could perhaps benefit from some 'movement' on the filter envelopes (if you can)?
nice FX around 1:50 pans work well
Ooh like the 'bells' at 2:05 .. good imaging of these!
Yup moar BASS plz!
Good stuff man!
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01-03-2011 21:53 |
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tryptech 
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Nice dark feeling, that high sound is nice man, nice mix, score is def too low on this one.
Very deep vibe
rpsct
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01-03-2011 23:28 |
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BattleDrone
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I think the tune could gain a lot of power when the mid synth would get a sub layer that is running in sync with the synth instead of the separate sub bassline you have now. The pads take up a lot of power, the drums should be more upfront and could do with a tiny bit of stereo.
It's all good but a bit too much "middle of the road" soundwise for my ears.
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02-03-2011 22:36 |
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shir_pan
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thanks for your reviews, theyre appreciated!
@Impact: got an opportunity to listen to it on different speakers, youre right about the bass, i think i need to get myself new monitors 
ill turn it up definitely
@BattleDrone: im not sure what you mean by "mid synth", probably the "bass-stab-sound" that enters at 1:09? i will check on adjusting the subbass to it, thx for the tip
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