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noosesone
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Please check out my new track 'Daniel De La Torre' and post your comments here!

this is a sample tack that is trying to make it in the CD please i would love some feedback ...that would be dope

thank you all nooses
26-02-2011 13:18
Spectral Pace
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Hey Nooseone, Spectral here. Thanks for reviewing my track. Tune sounds good. It sounds like some of your drum samples are overlapping in places and creating a phasey kind of effect. Tune definitely needs some bass to really give it weight. Keep working on it. Peace.
26-02-2011 14:06
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I like the acousticness of the drums, but sometimes theyre louder, in some parts they overlap so you get a phasing effect. Fix that. Which software are you usin?
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27-02-2011 16:46 Homepage of tryptech
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Ez man, typing as I listen..

Like ya break! Sounds well sorted..
Interesting use of FX to process the break without chopping it up..
like the 2nd layer that comes in.. oh it dropped out again
like your kick too.
snare sounds mono around 1:10 but then comes back in in stereo? thats a bit odd.

pads are a bit quiet and get dominated by the break/hats

Loads of good potential for a great track! Smile


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27-02-2011 17:07
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nice melody in the background, but i would turn the volume up on this one, also missin some subbass, track still needs a lot of work in general but it has potential for a nice liquid-tune

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01-03-2011 13:31
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I don't hear no track.
Just some silent drums (with phase cancelling on the kick) and a bit of atmospheric organ pads. Where's the bass?

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02-03-2011 22:40 Homepage of BattleDrone
noosesone
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thanks man ...yea not really a track and your right it has no bass.....

sorry if i don't fall under the norm....
i don't know what genre this will fall under since it does not have a bass part but
thanks for the advice
03-03-2011 01:57
noosesone
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thanks man...every one keeps saying what your saying....but yet i don't know what that phasing effect is... i kinda don't know anything about music theory what note is what and octave all of that stuff.....

just make music that i like

i use FL studio along with audacity and Virtual dj.....thats it i dont really use anything else ...

i have posted up a new song and will be posting up until i get tired of making beats....thanks alot man and if you have any ? feel free
03-03-2011 02:06
noosesone
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thanks man
03-03-2011 02:07
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If you reply to someone you should quote their text using this button which is above each posting....
that way people will know what you are answering.

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03-03-2011 13:12 Homepage of BattleDrone
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quote:
Originally posted by noosesone
thanks man...every one keeps saying what your saying....but yet i don't know what that phasing effect is... i kinda don't know anything about music theory what note is what and octave all of that stuff.....

just make music that i like

i use FL studio along with audacity and Virtual dj.....thats it i dont really use anything else ...

i have posted up a new song and will be posting up until i get tired of making beats....thanks alot man and if you have any ? feel free


You need to get at least some knowledge to be able to make a real tune.
Playing a drumloop and some samples isn't making a tune.
Your kick sample is getting canceled because your drumloop is repeating itself and there are 2 kicks being played at the same time, but they don't play in sync which results in a dull effect which takes away the power of the drum.

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03-03-2011 13:17 Homepage of BattleDrone
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quote:
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quote:
Originally posted by noosesone
thanks man...every one keeps saying what your saying....but yet i don't know what that phasing effect is... i kinda don't know anything about music theory what note is what and octave all of that stuff.....

just make music that i like

i use FL studio along with audacity and Virtual dj.....thats it i dont really use anything else ...

i have posted up a new song and will be posting up until i get tired of making beats....thanks alot man and if you have any ? feel free


You need to get at least some knowledge to be able to make a real tune.
Playing a drumloop and some samples isn't making a tune.
Your kick sample is getting canceled because your drumloop is repeating itself and there are 2 kicks being played at the same time, but they don't play in sync which results in a dull effect which takes away the power of the drum.


aaaahhhh i see what you guys are saying .......hmmm i use to like it but i guess i see what you guys are saying....

yea i would love to learn all that stuff ...but i am kinda new to producing ...

i tend to just play what sounds good to me ...it's all by ear
but thanks guys for the feedback, man keep it coming .....
all of it is helping me out to become better ...
04-03-2011 02:40
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