 Slaughtered Lamb ( a new tune by a new member) |
CHALLENJA
Steppa
Registration Date: 25-07-2004
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25-07-2004 07:21 |
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Surya 
The Robot
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Hmmm. Quite some noises and stuff, which are dark, I guess that was your aim, but it's also quite messy.
Tramen: sounds like you just took the loop and looped it. Cut it up and make some variations with it, this will make it sound less static. I'm not too fond of the changing in EQ either.
The overall sound of the tramen could be better: more punch in the kick and clearer sounding (more hi end).
About the bassline: just a sub that isn't very autidatble: distort it to make it more intresting.
Sounds like you're just starting out with producing? Sorry, but not very good. Just keep practicing!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-07-2004 18:24 |
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D-Pitch
Danny Jenk D-Pitch
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We have all made tunes that we think are great and every track u made is alway loads better than the last in ur own mind, so when ppl give u bad feedback they are not being twats its just we have all been there , my biggest peace of idvice i could give u is take ur faverate dnb tracks and lissen to them carefull and just make notes of what sounds sit were in a track and then try and set ur tracks upto a similair format ,also take ur drum loop and record 1 loop at ur chosen bpm and then open it in an audio editor and chop it up into it eliments and place seperate hits back into ur sequincer , then u have contol over ur drums. u have some interesting sounds and if u have just started to produce over the last year then ur on the rite track , but if its been like 10yr then id say give in mate
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29-07-2004 15:55 |
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Steppa
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Thanks D-pitch. Your tracks sound very professional. how did you master them, and what program did you use to make them? Thanks for the kind words, and ya i need to buy a sequencer, i dont know if soundforge cuts it. Thanks again
james
o i've been making DNB off and on for 4 years.
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29-07-2004 22:36 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Soundforge is a wave editor (mainly), not a sequencer. Get something like Fruityloops, Cubase, Logic, Buzz or Reason...
It's not what program that counts, it's how good you know to make use of it...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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29-07-2004 23:41 |
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Steppa
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ya thanks,. i got jakota buzz but it seems too confusing, i'm gonna start learning Cubase tommarow and make it my goal to master it by september.( a plus because i can start working with great producers like Tek Infektion out of Chi town and Plejik out here in VA, both who are signed artists to ballistic recordings and are my friends)
i see the limits with useing acid, especially its inconsitancy with using plugins. and i'm gonna make it my main stay to work on beats. i re-evaluated slaughtered lamb, its sounded great 4 months ago, now it seems "promissing" but toy. sorry about the link, but check other tunes i made like Massacre and Naligan, i am very proud of those. thanks again Surya. I take everything in stride and criticism is the best from people who have heard it all. thanks again
james
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30-07-2004 06:46 |
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Surya
The Robot
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I work with Buzz, but it's indeed not the easyest prog to start out with. Lots of possabilities though. The helpfile should get you started, it has a step by step tutor.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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30-07-2004 11:26 |
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