 Digital Hunters - Fastlane (JFX remix) |
jfx 
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Registration Date: 04-02-2004
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Hello,
My name is JFX. I'm a beginner Drum and Bass producer. I'm from São Paulo
Brazil, and I'd like to show my new work.
right click > save as...
Digital Hunters - Fastlane (JFX remix)
I hope you enjoy it.
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23-07-2004 20:51 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Quite some Brazil producers here, I think you're the third one already.
Like the dark feel of the intro.
Bassline is nice but add some slight tube distortion to it to increase the frequencyrange upwards so it sounds cleared.
Drums: quite nice, but your bassdrum is too loud and too deep. Give it more mid to make it more auditable.
Drop @ 2.13: good switch of themes.
The second bassline sounds a bit better soundwise, and is a bit louder. Make the first one a bit louder too, to bring them to the same level.
The amen sounds better than the tramen: it has more punch, try getting the same punch on the tramen.
The amen needs more hi-end though, sounds a bit too lofi.
Quite good, but needs some work on the sound
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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24-07-2004 15:54 |
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jfx
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26-07-2004 05:13 |
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CHALLENJA
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Registration Date: 25-07-2004
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I think Surya nailed it it terms of things to watch out for, i would also suggest using a lower quality MP3 conversion rate since its taking me over 5 minutes to download this and i have a good DSL connect. it usually takes me 20 seconds to download other peoples tunes. try using 128 that is what I use in WMA formating.(people hate waiting)IF you like tramens listen to what i done with them with the track Slaughtered Lamb on this forum. the slight hi hat ringer ride is actually the tramen faster than the normal one. kool eh. always compress and double up your beats for more punch. 
watch out on your popping , check how each sound comes in and out. compress, compress, compress. you should stick to one main theme to make the tune more runnin. the change ups are two different to mesh well IMHO.
stay up and keep at it
Challenja
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may the lord bless and keep you!
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28-07-2004 01:28 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by CHALLENJA
i would also suggest using a lower quality MP3 conversion rate since its taking me over 5 minutes to download this and i have a good DSL connect. it usually takes me 20 seconds to download other peoples tunes. try using 128 that is what I use in WMA formating.(people hate waiting) |
Nah, just upload the track to this site (read this) in this nice quality, downloading will be faster 
I don't like WMA, and I prefer higher bitrates. And I don't mind waiting, I'll review another track while it's downloading 
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