 Dazo - Untitled |
Dazo 
Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!
This is my last project, for now is just intro ( there something that i don't like in it, but i don't know what wxacly) and first drop, it's all in work in progress, so all feedbacks are welcome
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14-02-2011 17:54 |
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Monkey Nut1
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It could be that it sounds to busy during the intro and some of the samples are out of tune with others. Could have a stormer on ya hands with a little work.
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14-02-2011 21:26 |
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goonybag
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i dont think those detuned synths work at all, all gets a bit confusing. The synths at the very beginning start to work, but that detuned type synth, does not do it for me.
Now, the drop. I think this has a lot more potential, nice bass, good foundation for kik and snare, the drop is the best bit, work on it mate, youll get it!
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15-02-2011 11:05 |
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Hey Dazo. Intro sounds OK, but I would make that open hi-hat a lot less busy or maybe swap it for a closed hi-hat. Don't like the way you half drop and then drop. I'm no expert, but I like tunes with contrast. I would either come in with the beat at 00:37 or hold off until 01:26 when the actual drop comes in. Tune is better than your last one although I prefered the drop of your last idea. All the best, Pace.
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15-02-2011 11:38 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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You are improving. Just keep making tunes...
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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15-02-2011 12:59 |
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Dazo
Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2011
Posts: 23
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know what you mean guys, thanks, i'll work on it
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15-02-2011 15:01 |
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