 fruityLideasman - Sunday Wonkle Berries & Cream |
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Please check out my new track 'Sunday Wonkle Berries & Cream' and post your comments here!
Not really been producing that long. Just some ideas. Interested to hear feedback so I don't waste my time when working in Cubase.
Safe.
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13-02-2011 18:37 |
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tryptech 
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Not bad man, how long producing,
I like the drums nice and clean, just the bass isnt on point yet
would filter some mid out, and add a seperate subline
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thnx for the review
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13-02-2011 21:31 |
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BattleDrone
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Needs some sub bass... the idea is very premature... work to be done. It's not bad, but it needs extra stuff to make it sound full and interesting for a longer period of time than 44 seconds.
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13-02-2011 23:43 |
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Hey Tryptech I been producing about a year just playing about on FruityLoops with ideas. I have started using cubase but not there with it yet. I know what I want to do its just working out the nitty gritty. Although I have got someone pointing me in the right direction on it which is good. Safe BattleDrone, this is so premature I made this in about 30 mins lol I didn’t realise you could upload tunes only every 1.5 days so I have loads of ideas to upload all taken 30mins-3 hours. I appreciate no sub and nothing in at the moment. I sort of don’t wanna waste time on Fruity loops as I cant do what I want to do in it. FruitL is proper swag for proper production. Anyways boys I have some bigger ideas I worked on and love to hear your feed back when I upload them. Please note that they are only ideas – not saying these are ready for RAM yet. Lol Peace
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14-02-2011 10:39 |
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goonybag
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intro is very stiff, like i am marching forward with a plank of wood strapped to my back. all seems very stiff mate, and has a cold feeling as well, no warmth to the samples/sounds at all, as drone said, needs sub. keep at it mate, grind away, youll find the warmth 
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15-02-2011 11:13 |
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lmao Goonybag - love the way you put it. I agree these sounds are just samples with minimal tweaking done. I dont really want to play with sounds too much when im making ideas. When I have worked on tunes in cubase all the sounds ended up changing massively so i dont get to caught up on that at the mo. But bruvva the warmth will be felt soon im sure lol. I have loads of ideas to upload all based on similar principle just basic ideas but interested to hear your thoughts.
Big Up!
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15-02-2011 14:25 |
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Safe FLideasman. I would work on your drums and percussion a lot more. Its easy to come up with an idea, but its much harder to turn that idea into a finished (or nearly finished) product. In my own production I tend to focus on my weaknesses as in today's music industry you do have to be a full package. By the way, if you think the tune (or idea) is good enough, then that's all that matters. No-one can see the vision of the tune in your head, so really its your opinion that counts.
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17-02-2011 19:15 |
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