 Dazo - Leosz |
Dazo 
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Leosz' and post your comments here!
This is my last dnb track, i've to work more on some stuffs like the outro, the title is not definitive also
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11-02-2011 15:09 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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I would work on all aspects of the tune if this was my project.
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11-02-2011 16:13 |
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Hey Dazo, Pace here. First impressions are that this tune is not as good as the last one (still much better than your first). The structure seems very strange and hard to follow. Your half time beat seems slightly off / out of time and I would just get rid of it for now. When your drop comes, your beat seems OK and some of the distorted bass sounds you have used work well. To further build on this tune, I would add a light hi-hat right from the beginning and make sure the tune progresses logically every 16 bars. i.e., first set of 16 - intro, second set of 16 - build-up, third set of 16 - drop (there's no hard and fast way of doing it, but for now, I would just keep things simple and concentrate on what is most important). Keep trying! All the best, Pace.
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11-02-2011 16:17 |
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Dazo
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11-02-2011 16:58 |
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pusha
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not a fan of the beat it doesnt sound right almost like a diana ross track in intro then that mad shit after isnt nice on the ear try and make a rolling beat if u can this is a bit of a step back as far as beats are concerned some intresting bass sounds in here just work on drums
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12-02-2011 21:20 |
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I think you have some good ideas in this tune I just dont like any of the sounds, pads, or the beats, i think it all needs tweaking the sounds and the levels....I do like the idea of the drop just too busy and leads not clear enough for me and would be good to have a bigger change on the drop. I am using fruity loops and know how shit it is to be able to get things done compared to using cuebase. You need take these ideas to cuebase and if your using cuebase the you need to play with those sounds bruv - anyways what fuck do i know i am making ideas on fruityL and my ideas are wet - soon to be bashing the cuebase! anyways big up the idea! ;-)
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13-02-2011 18:06 |
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Dazo
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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ok, thanks for the feedback mate, i'm using reason 5 and it needs a lot of study for understanding quite well all the function of the program
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13-02-2011 20:10 |
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pusha
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Lol think we have got a Cubase salesman in the house stick with reason mate great daw when used properly
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13-02-2011 20:19 |
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Lol Pusha - Im a not selling cubase to anyone bruv. I not used reason or traktor or any other of these other programmes. I only see people using cubase who do top notch production! Anyways there is no right or wrong way - Surely!
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14-02-2011 11:03 |
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QBM
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loving the general idea behind this. reason 5 is one of the best daws out there when put in the right hands. keep up the good work and keep posting
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