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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Loneliness' and post your comments here!
New track, first used ozone isotope to master the bastard,i'm not a hero at it i know, it's a sneak preview, hope ya like, if not just tell
Analogue (tryptech) Kisses
__ ANALOGUE (Tryptech)
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11-02-2011 12:32 |
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shir_pan
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nice athmo in the song, feels like sunday morning dnb, great vocals, maybe id have used a tighter snare, also like the piano, first drop sounds a little sudden, maybe some crash-cymbals to give it more character
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11-02-2011 13:53 |
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Safe Tryptech. Like the intro percussion and the rolling beat when that comes in. The vocals work well in the tune also. Like the wobble in the bass. Would maybe raise the vocals up slightly and give the bass a bit of a boost around 60-80hz. Also try panning your pad / pad fx a bit more to the left and right. Look forward to hearing the finished version. All the best, Pace
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11-02-2011 16:07 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Too much stereo, I never used the stereo imager from ozone... I can't get my head around it.
Your mix sounds a bit hollow because of it.
Tune needs a clear hook, maybe some tearing deep bass or somehting... it needs some identity.
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11-02-2011 16:10 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
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11-02-2011 16:40 |
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pusha
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magical
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11-02-2011 20:16 |
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dLO
dannyLO
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u goin thru a name change tryp?
lovin the intro. would have liked to hear a more climatic drop maybe some more silence before it drops. The wobble bass is a neat touch & man that sub is sooo deep!!! wicked
love the use of vox too - very subtle but effective. I Like where this is going. I'm not entirely in love w/ the mastering tho tbh. Sounds a bit empty. But i know how much of a pain in the ass mastering is. anyways, good start at a good clean tune.
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11-02-2011 20:19 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
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Hi,
Great liquid vibe here.
like the sub and wobble, very nice work.
Also like use of the vocals. delicate but fit perfectly.
This is a great start of a huge tune, just get it tidy with the stereo and would be a top production.
Like It !
Cheers.
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12-02-2011 00:37 |
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Straight away im thinking clean - loving the vocals - very clean, rares sound very orignal feel which was nice and freshing. I was disappointed the drop wasnt filth - Im addicted to raw tunes i suppose. I still like it again it would have to be a driving tune for me. but love the shawshank redemption feel it has. i think the production sounds really nice and mixed down nice i really thought it sounded slick and keep the tunes coming - i wanna see some filth added to that tune hahahahah. Again more tunes with total filth lol ;-)
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13-02-2011 18:16 |
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