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shir_pan
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Registration Date: 01-02-2011
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled(new Version)' and post your comments here!
found some time to work on it regarding your comments, changed some little things, added some more bass, tried to balance the instruments better...what do you think of it?
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http://soundcloud.com/shirpan
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10-02-2011 14:32 |
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dLO 
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Registration Date: 29-05-2009
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better mate, much better. still not in love with it, but its getting there. remember to always use good qual samples, patches, etc. and give things plenty of space in the mix. two great rules of thumb to always think of when starting any project.
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10-02-2011 19:04 |
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First 16 bars sound much better and instruments seem well balanced. Like the way you have led into the next 16. Second set of 16 bars is good although I would add on top a really basic hi-hat (4 hits in a bar - don't overdo it - like you have done at 2:57) just so that a dj has a reference for mixing. Like the distorted bass you have added in parts, although I would have it much louder and only in certain places. It's nice to hear clear defined stages in a tune. Like the delay you have added to the piano although the delay on the chords doesn't sound quite right. It sounds fine on the single notes. If I were you I would seperate the piano so you have a non delayed version (for the chords) and a delayed version (single notes) playing at the same time. That way you still get the harmonics of the chords and the delay is not cluttered sounding. Also, tune would sound much better with some vocals, but be careful, you don't want to ruin the vibe. If you've got a mic, maybe you could record whispering. Might sound crap, but you need to see what you think. Looking forward to hearing the finished tune. All the best, Pace
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10-02-2011 20:37 |
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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Intro is tight
that bass is really nice in the break, drums could be more lively, try to add some stereo on the hihat work, its on a good track, can see you becoming great, melodies ar really takin me on a trip
well done
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11-02-2011 12:36 |
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Noisebound
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Registration Date: 26-05-2010
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Well done, great track. Unique style, beautiful melodies. Everything is just in place, structure is very good. I like the intro and all the transitions. The one thing that i would replace is the beat. Light amen break mixed with punchy kick and clappy snare would fit perfectly 
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