 Noisebound - Outer Galaxy (wip) |
Noisebound 
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Registration Date: 26-05-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Outer Galaxy (wip)' and post your comments here!
Hey dot be, I'm back after a long break and I want to share with you with a clip of my new creation. I am still working on it. The name will be different and some parts will be improved... I would like to see some feedbacks before I finish it 
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10-02-2011 12:50 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Good tune, bit too much reverb.
Could do with some clear hook or a vocal or something.
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10-02-2011 13:26 |
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dLO
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Registration Date: 29-05-2009
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great intro, great bass... liking it so far. like the real crisp snare & nice drums in general. drop is more powerful i think if you dont give us the bass before the drop. Keep it hidden until the drop then BAM! BASS 
i like the use of stereo. like the fx, drum edits, bass... this is real nice. would like to hear the finished version.
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10-02-2011 19:01 |
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Hey Noisebound, Pace here. Like your drums although they sound slightly over-compressed. The balance of the mix also seems slightly off. The main pad seems too loud. Sub needs to be much louder and a real presence in the mix for this sort of tune to work well. Reminds me a bit of Sub Focus Deep Space mixed with Sub Focus Follow the Light. If you get Deep Space up in your sequencer and keep switching back and forth, you'll notice the changes you'll need to make. I find it a useful trick when I'm trying to get the balance of a tune right, find a tune that has a similar make-up and try and mimic the mixdown levels of individual tracks or busses. A really good basis for a tune though. It's definitely worth finishing. Look forward to seeing how this one turns out. All the best, Pace.
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10-02-2011 20:21 |
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tryptech
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Gotta love that intro, very wide, great, good atmosphere, love how those drums melt their way through. Sound engineering is awesome in this one, okee man that bass is like sugar, really nice, very good. Love it man, killer track
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11-02-2011 12:38 |
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Noisebound
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Registration Date: 26-05-2010
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@ BattleDrone
Yeah, there's too much reverb on some sounds, especially on that high synth, i noticed it after i had uploaded it here... Would be happy to add a vocal in this track, can't find the one that could fit.
@ dLo
I will change a drop just a little, will make the transitions of the intro smoother. And yeah, removing a bass before the drop is not a bad idea, but I have tried that already and it sounds a bit empty, so i will have to find a way to fill those spots
@ Pace
This is the first time i use this kind of drums so they can sound slightly wrong though there is nearly no compression on them. I think that bass and pads are at the necessary volume for this kind of dnb, but I'll check alll the levels one more time. That tip with similar tracks can be useful for me
Thanks everyone for replies, it's nice to hear someone's opinion. I will have all these advices in mind when I'll be finishing song
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11-02-2011 15:29 |
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goonybag
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intro is deep, man, i love that bass type reece pad, great effects, a really ethereal, late night dnb track, great effort, love it.
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12-02-2011 06:19 |
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Glodaragz
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Registration Date: 26-06-2009
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Nice tune till now.U have nice bell melodies!
Also great fx! Sounds very good.
The bass is great too.But i was waiting for something more when bass and beat started.Maybe stronger drums. Thant will change tune-my opinion
Big ups!
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12-02-2011 15:24 |
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pusha
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very nice mate
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12-02-2011 22:00 |
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endle185
Newbie
Registration Date: 04-05-2010
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danny byrd, thats what i hear here. where do i finf hard dnb. started off well though
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17-02-2011 19:14 |
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