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hedset
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'bloodclot3(final)' and post your comments here!!!
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by hedset: 21-07-2004 18:48.
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21-07-2004 06:53 |
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-J- 
Big Bad Battyman
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if you do this to my speakers one more time i swear to god and satan i'll beat the living crap out of you ! 
please upload a cleaner audiofile, for the sake of everyone who cares about their speakers 
cause i'm not gonna listen to this for two more seconds 
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It's a spiritual thing !
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21-07-2004 12:11 |
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djfreemc
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That bass sounds like a big fart on a very bad day. Kick that sample out of this track, of your harddrive and as far away from this universe as possible (I u made it with a synth u need to turn at least the lfo speed all the way to the other side). I couldn't listen to the rest of the track very carefully because of the bass going way to loud & sounding so bad so I couldn't turn up the volume. But it seemed anything but original. The part after the drop is waaaaaaaaayyyyy too chaotic.
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The mysteries of the distorted snare...
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21-07-2004 13:01 |
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hedset
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21-07-2004 18:32 |
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thechronic
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OK I replaced this one by the new version!
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If you find spam on the site, please hit the  button and select my name. I'll personally kick it to the murky depths of hell where it belongs! 
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21-07-2004 19:27 |
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hedset
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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chronic, the url's missing 
whered it go,lol
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21-07-2004 19:50 |
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Surya
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I fixed it 
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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21-07-2004 19:53 |
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Raider
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Maybe I'll check it later on, on bigger speakers, but what I can say after checking on Pc Speakers :
- Same about the bass
- Let the beat come upfront.
- Synth Stab is kinda Hardware, make a track round the Hardware stab pal!!!
Cheers
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22-07-2004 10:24 |
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Surya
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Listened to the new version
First thought: where's the intro? You just drop in there with beats and bassline blazin... Make a decent intro man
Yeah, not too fond of the bassline either. It doesn't sound phat, it just sounds distorted and thin.
The stab is quite OK, but could use some delay and reverb.
Goes on with the same stuff for a bit too long.
The sub: doesn't sound very warm either, phatten it up too.
Drop: amen is quite nice but it does need some crisper touch to it, and maybe layer a kick over it. And if you start layering, why not layer some snares too? (I'm a sucker for layering drums 
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Drumvariation is quite good
Not really bad, but it does need a lot of work on all aspects.
But no harm done, since you're new to this, I've heard worse debuts
But I have to give it a 1 for the time being
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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24-07-2004 15:37 |
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(put the fixed one up, but how do i delete the old one 
. i did this track in one shot, like 20 minutes or so, i didnt expect good reviews, but a lot of advice,lol. but im surely learning, i totally macked out the drums part of the game so that a good thing just the bass variations a pain but in all, the next one gonna be tight