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Dazo
Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2011
Posts: 23
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!
I'm now working on this tune, this is obviously not completed, it's just a project, with no intro or outro, no breakdown, just a drop, tell me what you think about it
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08-02-2011 14:42 |
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Really liking some of the sounds you have used here. This tune is much better than your last one which in turn was better than the tune before that! Well done. My advice would be, structure the tune in a way described in previous posts about 'Hyperworld', add some more sounds in sections so that you have different sections of 16 bars with different sounds in them. This is to keep the listener interested. I think you have partially done this already, but maybe add more and switch the tune up further. All the best, Pace.
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08-02-2011 14:48 |
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W3R3W00F
Starving artist/DnB newbie
Registration Date: 04-02-2011
Posts: 20
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Ooooh, dark DnB goodness.
I got down to this one. I like it. The only things that "bothered" me (though it really isn't a big deal) were the pauses in the beats at 00:02, 00:05,00:08, 00:11, and so on and so forth. Other than that, it's a catchy beat that's got power, hook, rhythm, and plenty of bass.
Good work, man!
__ Starving artist an aspiring musician. Also, game designer.
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08-02-2011 18:27 |
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Dazo
Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2011
Posts: 23
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thanks guys, i'm working a lot on this tune, i'll try to follow all your suggests, i'll reupload this when is finished
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09-02-2011 20:12 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
Posts: 853
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Very ncie improvement, see you've listened too spor or so, had that vibe a little.
Well done
__ ANALOGUE (Tryptech)
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11-02-2011 12:42 |
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