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dLO
dannyLO
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Please check out my new track 'Promises (wip)' and post your comments here!
new tune im workin on at the mo for a forthcoming ep on soul deep recs. Its a total w.i.p. rough mix, rough ideas of where vocal hooks will sit. also, may be toying with adding / changing the bass lines. thoughts / comments / crits...
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07-02-2011 21:27 |
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Evening dLO. Nice textures throughout the tune. Very chilled vibe. Swift thinks this is a good driving tune. I would maybe get a singer in and get him/her to come up with some stuff similar to your vocal samples. The tune works well with the vocals and I think maybe go a bit further with them. Look forward to hearing what you do with this. A;ll the best, Pace
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07-02-2011 22:18 |
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Impact
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07-02-2011 22:56 |
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BattleDrone
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That stereo is PHAT crafted shit!
Intro is a bit repetitive.
The vocals are a bit repetitive (hey, I know it's WIP). Was expecting some more bass centred track but this is cool too.
Purely production-wise this is as good as it gets.
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07-02-2011 23:04 |
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pusha
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vocal is nice mate great track mate when it drops its got wicked roll
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08-02-2011 22:49 |
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DRS
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Again feeling this tune. i could go on about all the individual parts but in short they are all banging. the only thing i would do different is change the bass melody, mainly cos it is a bit too laid back for me. i would add a slightly more energized rythmic bass... if i absolutely had to criticise!
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09-02-2011 02:22 |
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dLO
dannyLO
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Hey guys thnx for the input. I played around with several bass ideas for this like some junglish wobbles and some kind of "ripping" little dark stuff, but it all sounded a bit too out of place. For some reason I kept leaning towards just a straight deep sub. But I think I'll have another go. Also working on dropping the hook a bit sooner so it's less montonous. Will have a closer look at the imaging too, but it doesnt seem too outta whack on my setup.
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09-02-2011 04:30 |
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tryptech
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Man, this is some sickness, i love this sound, lenzman is my favo jeah, this is comparing, nice shit dlo, you gonna hitta the scene soon. Though that baby sound is getting over used, but still love it. Bass is nice simple warm and deep those vocals fit in perfectly.
LOVE YAH style realy deep roller
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11-02-2011 12:48 |
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