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Dazo Dazo is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Naylon' and post your comments here!

05-02-2011 10:35
Pace and Swift
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Sound quality is much better. Track is a big improvement on your last one. Well done. I would turn the kick and snare up a bit louder. Also that bass can come up a bit. Don't know what others are gonna advise, but I would maybe add more sounds into the tune so there is more going on. I would also start the tune with percussion as that can be your mixing marker (for a DJ). All the best, Pace.
05-02-2011 14:22 Homepage of Pace and Swift
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can see your takin advice on board.. dont get too down while your findin your sound man,, i know uve just started producin. mate one of the first tunes i made i posted on here and it was utter shit, its all about progression mate. the postive thing i got out of this tune is that i like all the lfo swichtups, give it a few months when you have explored some more sounds, and that synth will start soundin heavy.. if you haven't already id strongly advise that youread up about eq'ing, as it will help your mixdowns no end.

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05-02-2011 14:58
Age Break Age Break is a male
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a big improvement
strongly suggest putting alot of time in the bass next song, try diffrent effects and experiment with it etc.
bass is always a big turn on for ppl.
try adding a lil reverb to the snare to make it sound less dry,
already sounds way better then my 4th song i made so your doing great.
also try getting eqing right, very important to make ur mixdown sound clean!

keep experimenting, and never give up!
you'll get there Smile

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05-02-2011 15:49
Dazo Dazo is a male
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thanks a lot guys your help is essential for me
05-02-2011 15:59
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Biggup, very cool improvement
nice
just add some percussion over the drums, some sizzling hihatwork makes the piece more lively

respect

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05-02-2011 17:22 Homepage of tryptech
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Ez man,
intro bass synth is interesting..
watch your stereo width on the vocals- they sound VERY wide. (too wide is generally bad)
effect at 1:30 is good.. can hear your idea and I like the direction Smile
Massive improvement over the first track you posted! Smile

Like others have said- some overlaid percussion, and a bit more variation and you got a strong sound with a definite identity!
Good work!


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05-02-2011 20:11
Dazo Dazo is a male
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thanks! i'll try to make this change you told me and i'll reupload it later Smile
05-02-2011 20:24
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woohey some hi hats a massive improvement next step is learning to eq my friend get yourself hold of a few breaks the simple amen break will do for starters i reckon then with eq high pass it then try stickin it behind the beat you got hear all ready it will sound better i promise

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06-02-2011 00:50
W3R3W00F W3R3W00F is a male
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I enjoyed this one. Smile It has a spooky, mysterious ambience to it. The beats are nice, rapid, consistent, and have a tense air to them. Once I'm bopping my head to a DnB song, I know the beats are good. I, in fact, bopped my head. A lot.

The only thing I didn't really like was the ending. The ending seemed too abrupt, and sounded more suitable for a loop. Maybe if it faded out it would've worked better for the song.

I like the quiet choir(?) in the background. It has a tense, spooky air to it. Smile It almost sounds like some Halloween track, but that's just what I think. I really think this fits well.

The song is ominous, somewhat quiet, and tense. I like it. Big Grin

Great work on this track!

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08-02-2011 19:12
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