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tryptech 
Tryptech
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Please check out my new track 'Jazzy Charlotte Feat Rachelle Spring' and post your comments here!
New minimal atmozferic track, hope you like
grtz
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01-02-2011 23:41 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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The Beegees through a woman's mouth. (She's a woman's man???)
Is this a virtual singer? The vocal sounds a bit shaky/stutterish. Maybe you had to mess a lot with the vocal to make it fit (fits well though).
I don't like the guitar which is panned all the way to the right, it sounds like an error to me. Maybe you should edit the vocal a bit (repeat parts, delay, reverb,...).
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02-02-2011 10:15 |
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Impact
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02-02-2011 10:47 |
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The vibe, build-up and production in this tune are excellent. I love the way the tune has a real mix of natural instruments and then comes in with the main bassline. The texture of Rachelle's vocals sit very well in the mix and you've kept her sounding natural and haven't messed around with vocal fx too much (although I can hear a bit of autotune buziness goin on!). Potentially this is a real Drum N Bass anthem and could make it big. For me though, what puts me off is that the lyrics are not original. I have no doubt that yourself and Rachelle can come up with some orginal material that fits this music. For me this would make the transition in this tune from just a cool DnB cover to a tune which is an anthem in it's own right. All the best, Pace out.
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02-02-2011 11:56 |
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tryptech
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@Battle, jeah i know, there is some autotune on the vocal to pitch it right, but can do without it, the vocal had some guitar playin beneath it, so i tried to mask it, but jeah its still there. Thnx for reviewing
@Impact, Yes autotune man, maybe its better without, glad you like it
@Pace & Swift, I wish i knew some ladies who could sing like that man, its a jazz rework by rachelle spring, dont know the chick, but think she's hot. Thanks for listening.
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02-02-2011 13:18 |
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pusha
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man i fuckin love your tracks
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02-02-2011 20:40 |
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shir_pan
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nice track overall, id like to hear more of the hihats, i cant really spot them in the track, the guitar sounds kinda irritating.
maybe use some fx on the vocals. i miss some power behind the drums but i think thats just my taste. but i would put some variation in the drumbeat as well as on the vocals, sounds pretty much the same through the whole track. i like the melody in the part without the vocals. all in all the track fits together nicely but i would like to have some more power in it for my taste
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03-02-2011 18:29 |
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dLO
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07-02-2011 03:57 |
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W3R3W00F
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Registration Date: 04-02-2011
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Well, this is a pretty nice track. I'm not a huge fan of minimal DnB, but this one is surprisingly catchy. It has a slow, but somewhat tense build up, and has a jazzy, flowing rhythm. It's a little weird that the lyrics were taken from the Bee Gee's "Stayin' Alive". The vocals were otherwise pretty nice too. The only thing that bugged me was that the vocals were really synthesized sounding. That's just my opinion, though.
Good work, man. 
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07-02-2011 20:42 |
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endle185
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no, stop this singing thing. its all wrong. hard and dark, original please!!!!!!!
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17-02-2011 19:09 |
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The Nitrous
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20-02-2011 07:01 |
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Nice and Groovy!
