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donnybrook - Vioro

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donnybrook donnybrook is a male

Donnybrook

Registration Date: 10-03-2010
Posts: 48

Please check out my new track 'Vioro' and post your comments here!

Work in progress... I haven't uploaded in a very long time. Old school sound. Glitchcore/breakcore. Cheers.

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01-02-2011 11:24

Pace and Swift
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Registration Date: 20-01-2011
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First impressions are that the tune has a good 'sinister' vibe and feel to it. I would further compress the string sections together to take some more dynamic range out of them as currently different samples are popping out over each other. Maybe add some 'air' to the strings around 10-12khz, but bring their overall level down maybe 1-2db (or more). Understand it's a work in progress. Looking forward to hearing what you do with it. All the best, Pace.

01-02-2011 11:34

BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male

2161... the future.

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Drums could be more upfront.
Like the atmosphere, not into glitch and the likes. Can appreciate this one though.
Would have loved some phat bass hits here and there, but I suppose that you didn't want that to happen?

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01-02-2011 21:18

tryptech tryptech is a male

Tryptech

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Nice edit,
I would prefer an more snappy snare sound, drums can be snappier think, but nice atmozz, has a special vibe i like.

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01-02-2011 23:46

donnybrook donnybrook is a male

Donnybrook

Registration Date: 10-03-2010
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Thanks for the responses, its been almost over 8 months since I last posted a song I believe... been quite a while. Love that you guys got back to me so quick! Great community up on here. Anyways, I was aiming for a bit of an old school jungle sort of sound but with a twist of glitch and decided to roll with it. I was definitely looking use more bass though, but I couldn't really find a sound that went too well with the song. I experimented with a few different reese basses but they aren't really my forte and didn't sound as nicely as I hoped they would. Speaking of which, anybody have a link to a good reese tutorial? Oh and I'm definitely going to be layering some more snares over my current beat, want to go for that harder sound, but still keep it older sounding.

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04-02-2011 06:09

Impact
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Registration Date: 29-08-2010
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typing as im listening.

feeling the orchestral intro Big Grin

Cant think where you got that idea.. Wink

Like the dirty distorted strings.. reminds me of call and response by source direct (in a good way!)

some interesting ideas.. just need to work on your mixdown and panning on some of the channels.

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04-02-2011 08:05

W3R3W00F W3R3W00F is a male

Starving artist/DnB newbie

Registration Date: 04-02-2011
Posts: 20

Let me sum up my thoughts as briefly as possible...

Egyptian-esque March. XD

I didn't enjoy it too much, sorry. I guess it just isn't my style. The intro was pretty cool, but after about 00:27, I felt a little disappointed. That weird... flute/string/high pitched sounding thing didn't really feel like it fit in with the track, in my opinion. The beats are okay, but become pretty repetitive over time.

It needs some work. My advice is to take out that high pitched instrument and to add more variation to the beats. At the moment it's a little repetitive.

Edit: Grammar fixes. 4 of them. Tongue

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This post has been edited 4 time(s), it was last edited by W3R3W00F: 07-02-2011 21:20.

07-02-2011 21:00

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