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Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Drums aren't very loud, give them a boost. Quite nicely done though.
Bassline is nothing impressive, but quite allright. That goes for the whole track. Nice 'n' fucky, but nothing special
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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20-07-2004 20:15 |
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-J-
Big Bad Battyman
Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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take the lil rythmic sfx sample from the middle of the tune
and make another tune with it ...
not my style, but not really well produced imo ... (srry 
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the mixin is defo unbalanced, bassline is weak and doesn't even fit with the lfo'y melody u got goin on.
and, the melody with the wobwob in the beginning ... i think it's one of my first piano lessons (from 1 2 3 piano 
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srry, doesn't work for me ...
try payin attention to:
mixin
melodies (be careful with melodies, a right sound has a right melody, but don't overdo
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don't make sounds cross if they don't fit (be tighter with yer synths)
mind your bassline, it's gotta sound good, and the melody of a bassline has to be (+-) in harmony with a main melody ... elsewise music makes no sense
structurize ...
don't know how long u've been producin, but it's a nice start ... 
well chosen title tho !!
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20-07-2004 21:24 |
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miki
Producer
Registration Date: 10-06-2004
Posts: 63
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thanks -J-, I keep on trying ...
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MiKi
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21-07-2004 15:42 |
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