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stino stino is a male
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Please check out my new track 'bedtime' and post your comments here!!!

not finished

drops need work

comments really appreciated thx

even if you think it sucks ! :]

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by stino: 18-07-2004 12:32.

18-07-2004 12:20 Homepage of stino
Surya Surya is a male
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44 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 9.27

Quite funny intro, but sounds good.
Bass kicks in: means business Big Grin Nice, but needs some work on the EQ part
Drop: lacks power. This has mainly to do with the drums: those should be more up front and they sound a bit fluffy, they lack power. Choose another snare or do some layering.
The synth is nice.
Second drop: add a small gap just before the drop: thiss will add to the impact.

So overall: good idear, not bad at all, cool bassline, but needs some more work on the drums, EQ and some details in the sequencing

2.5/5

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18-07-2004 12:36 Homepage of Surya
stino stino is a male
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thx for the hints ...

will lay it aside for some time , 'll get back with finished version in a month or so

all the others , tell me if you like it ! Smile )

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18-07-2004 12:39 Homepage of stino
miki miki is a male
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quite good intro, hihats are fine, it's good they're loud, for the first time I thought it could be some lullaby, but there started that disorted bassline and then scary nightmare. I like the beats at the begining, how they roll ... And that piano loop is nice. It's not my style but it's great.

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19-07-2004 14:58
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