Surya 
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Quite fast, no?
Rides are a tad too loud
Snare is too... 909ish, find a more intresting more acoustic sounding one, or at least do some layering.
Kick needs a boost.
Your bassline is quite nice, but needs a boost too, it gets overpowered by the sub. But give it some more hi end, if possible.
Good idear, but you need more to make it a "proper" track, it will get repetetive and boring if you don't add anything...
2.25/5
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18-07-2004 12:42 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Very basic and simple track.
IMO you picked the wrong samples, while the rhythm is dnb, the sounds are more techno styled, especially since you used the 909 kick and snare. It would sound more like dnb if you would use some acoustic drum samples instead of drum machine samples 
There are only very few elements and little variation, which doesn't make for a very interesting listening experience...
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27-08-2004 00:42 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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Very quick, sounds a bit like a beachsong ( intro).subbass sounds good. snares too light. and also the rides are to heavy? you could use some more variations too. other noises basses atmos or beats. the manipulation on de secundary sound is cool too at the end but a takes a lot more to call it a song.
2/5
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01-10-2004 18:42 |
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MOpKOBb
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Registration Date: 22-04-2003
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yep think so to... i do like the melodie of the first bassline that comes in (sorry but i don't have much technical nowledge) think they are subs...
you haven't got much variation in sounds so it sounds a little mmh...easy made. the production in general is a bit 'dof' i think. Needs a boost or a little resampling in more than one sound. But like the idea of your song. fast but chill...
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