Please check out my new track 'Music Trip' and post your comments here!
Still unfinished tune.
I made this on Fl studio 9.For sub bass-Sytrus.For Reese-Sytrus too.For pad-Fm 8.And other instruments are made in sytrus too.
Hope you will enjoy,and feedbacks are appreciated.
Big Ups!
I don't like the reeseintro.
Try to use a pad or a dark reese and the phasing will sound much cooler.
Also there's no drop.
You build up to a drop that doesn't quite exist, so why build up the tension? I hope you get my point, so or ditch the build up or make a fat bassline.
I don't really like this one. Sorry mate.
You have better songs already
Personal taste of course
its a nice track but i feel like its just missing that fatness that it needs that all dnb has even minimal deep stuff not meaning to sound like a prick but i hope you know what i mean
nice intro pad. that bell pad is just okay. Kind of a long intro IMO. Also, the drop could be a little more climatic. Try dropping the pad out for a bit during the drumroll. some nice drum edits in here. Might need a little more dynamic hi hats tho. Try layering some other hats or ride maybe. Tune gets a bit repetitive after a while. But nice soundz. Overall, a nice step up from last week. Keep workin it mate!
not too sure on the intro synth which is a bit bland for a try at an epic melody, think it would all kick in better if it were some mystery to it (processing)
don't like that filtering in the beats, the drop is very flat too, not enough oomph generally.
not hearing any one prominent bassline although there are subs.
the biggest problem I hear are offbeat lfo's be it on the filter or pitch of your synthed sounds.
bug ups for trying to do your beats manually but sneak in a break or two to layer it - try for much more coherent sound of the drums.
sorry man, not much of the things I like in this, on to the next one.
the intro pad is too unoriginal and generic. but man, the drop (or was there one?) was waaay too unconvincing. there's no bass! dnb tune can't be without bass m8
it's just really quite sub. anything else just doesn't even need to be there then.. work on the bass, then the other stuff. if you got it right, it will all blend nice together. (the originality is another thing)
it's just really quite sub. anything else just doesn't even need to be there then.. work on the bass, then the other stuff. if you got it right, it will all blend nice together. (the originality is another thing)