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Sensa 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 14-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Breathe (Finished Official Breathless Remix)' and post your comments here!!!
edit by thechronic: all tracks by djsensa are removed because of repeated use of copyrighted samples
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13-07-2004 18:42 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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um as far as a remix track, the over all basis was nice...i liekd taht...and the bass in the begginning was weak...deffinitely couldve used some more kick...and less fruitiness (imo) BUT...however at like 1:45, it got a lot better...i was diggin the whole digi bass thing...i like it...good work...4+
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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14-07-2004 03:31 |
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T.roll
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Wov! This one is much better! Will make a review a bit later, after listening it at home with better sound system.
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14-07-2004 14:56 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is quite good, good work on the drums (kick could use a tiny boost). Bit too much vocals for my taste though.
Guitar fits nice, especially when the track drops. Good bassline. Snare could use more low-mid here.
Quite simple but nice track that needs some more work on the mastering.
3.25/5
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15-07-2004 11:58 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Lol that pitched yoyoyo is funny 
Are you sure you haven't got any copyrighted samples in there? 
I don't like the intro so much, the pizzicato that is introduced at 0:21 has a cheesy melody I think, luckily it doesn't last long and doesn't come back after it stops
From 1:24 onwards the track becomes very interesting, the sound is good too, very dense and powerful.
1:47
You use a fast 16/16 kick or floortom pattern which often moves to the hard right (eg at 2:25 etc), this has too much low end in it, which brings the stereo out of balance. The rule is to put all low frequency content in the centre, but I wouldn't do that with that sound, just reduce low end when it moves out of the centre.
The kick is not pronounced enough in some parts, especially when the music becomes more full. The kick in the beginning sounds weird, a bit spread out, better would be if it is solid and mono. Could be an effect you put on it such as early reflections or a short room or something.
The rest of the drums sound nice, good hihats, nice layered snare. Percussion loops are good too.
Nice hihat lines, but do they really have to be in the centre? Open it up!!
The multitude of vocal styles is too much, definitely keep the female vocal but tone down on the rest. I love the way the female vocal appears just before a change in the music, to announce it, very well done!!
Buildup is good, nice short breaks and good following up of the different themes. Most sounds are well chosen, I like that thin filthy distorted synth line, and its melody is good too, with nice variations.
And the flow is just great, really rolling and the song is over before you know it!
Needs a bit of a rework, but for the rest its a good track!!
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