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Emblem-X 
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12-07-2004 15:43 |
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Surya
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Oh yeah forgot to send you feedback on the earlyer version...
Like the gated strings.
Drums are quite nice, but a bit too messy in the hi end and kinda lacking in the low end (the whole track is...)
Melodies are nice.
Once the hoover like thingy comes in it starts sounding a bit too old skool for my taste...
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12-07-2004 16:13 |
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There's too less low end.. some eq here and there should help.. at first i wanted to ptu in some bassline but i'mma skip on that, cuz i like the 'airy' feel to it now 
and the drums could use a good clean up too.. gonna strip some hats away, they make things too messy..
I made this track for a special someone 
hope's she's gonna be happy with it
cheerz
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13-07-2004 12:38 |
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Surya
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Tsss, you romantic soul
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13-07-2004 13:20 |
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Emblem-X
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Originally posted by Surya
Tsss, you romantic soul
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13-07-2004 15:58 |
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Soi
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Found it on breakz also.
First of all: I like the whole musicality to it. Even if it's more or less continually repeating the main theme, all the little different changes and relations between the arpeggio's, layers, sounds,... are like a gentle breeze in my ear.
But on the other hand, i totally agree with Surya that it's lacking low, warm deep sounds. Euh, 'Low end' i think it's what they call it. Maybe some subtle subbas?
Drums are indeed sometimes too much.
And tell the girl that your track has been approved of @ a famous dnb-site packed with top-notch criticasters.
Go get'm bwoi!!
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13-07-2004 22:13 |
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Emblem-X
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hehehe no doubt i will 
i stripped away those hats, and now it's got more space to the sound, sound much cleaner..
i'mma try those basses anyway, i'll drop it when it's fullt finished
thx for the comments
they've been wildly usefull 
cheerz
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