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Please check out my new track 'Doctor's Order' and post your comments here!
well i've dona an all nighter for this trying some usefull tips and this is it. it's still a 'kermisschijf' but it's just the way it is i guess. layered the snare and compressed it, same thing for the drum. kinda remade the synth thingy and put in a vocal.. now when the drop comes the second wobble is a bit weird, but when i play it reason it isn't. i have no clue on what might cause this. still kinda proud of the bass since it's the first time i actually managed to distort it properly.. and before i forget. i got the comment of it sounding 80 style tv serie like a team or nightrider... personally, if my tune was ever the theme song of any of those two... it would have been AWESOME!
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16-12-2010 07:53 |
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pusha
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i could pretty much copy and paste the last review i did of this track here . sorry mate soundsexactly the same apart from vocal really could use a break to get it rolling
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16-12-2010 21:45 |
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dLO
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bass line does sound good. nice vocal sample. Some sweep fx may help the first drop. still very 80s sounding, but that's cool 
This has potential, but like pusha said it needs a break or 2 layered in there to give the drums some depth. check out the samples section of this site there's some decent breaks there to get you started. then make some variations in the break & bass line, add some sfx for flavor. This has potential, but needs some work.
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16-12-2010 22:13 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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This is a digital rockband instead of DnB.
Long bass notes with no movement or groove ruin everything.
Layer a break on those drums because they sound thin and robotic most of the time.
Towards the end things start to improve a bit.
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16-12-2010 22:53 |
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freddy reeks
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Funky!!! I rekon u could get the beats sounding fatter the snare sounds a bit flat, I cant really hear the hats either maby my shit speakers thou :/
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