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Hidden identity Hidden identity is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Red_zone' and post your comments here!

Ok this is my little song idea.
In my mind, it's not the best song but it is good enough. If anyone would want to change it or make it into something new, I can give out the .flp zip. I realize I could have added more sounds, but this is how it is. A bit minimal, instead.
Comments?

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28-11-2010 19:11
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Not a bad track mate,

some nice ideas, not keen on the fade out half wat through.

Think you need to add another break to help the beats roll. Bit rigid at the moment.

Sound quality not bad mate.

cheers =]

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28-11-2010 23:34
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Keep at it.
Your EQing needs work and the mixdown is way too dry.

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30-11-2010 10:05 Homepage of BattleDrone
TarekFM
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Its may be simple but boy did i have fun listening to this track!!

I think its perfect for the dancefloor....would sound phat in the club...i really like the bassline...weighty, well rounded...nice!

i concur w/ what battledrone said about it sounding a bit dry, sounds almost like a demonstration track from a sample cd at this point...i think maybe just garnish it a bit.....a break(or another if i m missing it).....maybe severely high passed, one with a lot of high freq content.....whatever u do don't change the overall vibe of the mix just make sure the addition is just noticable...even some tambourines low in the mix maybe..

f-in ell that stereo noise freaked me out on more than one occasion...tried the song w headphones too and i couldn't tell if it was in the flat or not!!

did u use a stereo expander for that....it sounds a bit unatural, if thats what u are going for cool, otherwise its just freaky(which again may be cool).....plus it may well just vanish in mono, which most sound systems use..

if u [I]do[/I wish to change it......maybe use a chorus or other fx plug instead....there is enough space in the mix that u can afford not to have in what sounds like surround sound....JUST A THOUGHT!!

anyways listened to it 2x cos i enjoyed so much...can't wait to hear finished version...pls finish it!! Drummer

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30-11-2010 12:10
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Sounds at bit all over the place with lvls but some sik b lines ,wikid style/vibe 2 it! what did u make it on?
03-12-2010 21:57
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I made it on my laptop using earphones and FL studio.

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03-12-2010 23:03
Brassel Brassel is a male
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Like it but needs work

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05-12-2010 16:54
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sounds like one of my fiest atempts on fruity a couple of years ago keep at it mate

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05-12-2010 19:11
TitaniumFilms TitaniumFilms is a male
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The intro's drums sound great from the beginning, but then slowly get annoying. The beginning bass almost kills the soundtrack, but it is quickly repaired by improved pitch changes. Not as repetitive as most songs here. I must commend you for that. There are several points in the song where I think vocals and possibly strings would sound good in, but despite that the instruments sound great together. Great save, you just made your song moderately awesome! It sounds like something that would play a skate park for some reason.
31-12-2010 02:06
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Heavy drumz, the bass sound is kinda messy as it is now. Maybe use less reverb on the lows and seperate the lows from the highs in it a little more. Good start, keep at it, it's too early to say much more. Z

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