surora23 - Lethargy State

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surora23 - Lethargy State

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surora23 surora23 is a male

Agressive Melodic Disorder

Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Lethargy State' and post your comments here!!!

This is deff one of those chilled beginning songs, and then kicks in...It starts off asa solid dnb beat, and drops into some breaks a few times...adding for some variety, and a deff cool feel...IT DOES HAVE SOME CLIPPING IN IT BUT BARE WITH ME...this isnt the final works, but something i really put together jsut to see how it turns out...although the mastering and what not is not finished, the overall basis of the track is...Hit me up with comments, suggestions and etc...and AGAIN bare iwth the clipping...(MY SOFTWEAR BLOWS), and sampled loops suck to work with...

This track has been deleted on the producer's request

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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Surora23: 09-07-2004 21:54.

09-07-2004 21:36

T.roll T.roll is a male

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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Can't dovvnolad it right novv 'cauze via CDMA it'z too zlovv (i mean not fazt Big Grin

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definitely vvill do that tomorrovv. Indeed the revievv vvill come right after. Cool

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11-07-2004 23:06

T.roll T.roll is a male

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Here i am finally with a review Smile

Same prob's dud.
Your drums sound a bit separate from the rest of other stuff. Actually main drum sound's like a trance style drum. A snare otherwise is to low. Layer another one on it, more snappy with mid-hi end freq's.
Why don't you use a compression on your drum's?
If you don't have one i could recommend you a Steinber Mastering Edition if your software supports DXi plugins. It contains a real nice compressor and other stuff for final mastering, e.g. loudness maximizer, etc. I tryed to open your track in Sound Forge an put some compression on it. Sounded a way better.
Bass is pretty nice itself. Like this BSE style sound the track begins with.
RESULT: Needs a lot of work still. It's kinda good base for a real steppy track Big Grin

Try to bring in more effects and details. For now this tune souns empty.
RATE: 2+

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12-07-2004 20:11

Surya

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I kinda like the "snare" (I guess it's acually layered with a clap or something). The kick on the other hand could sound more accoustic instead of synthesised imho with a bit more mid

Sub is nice. Not sure about the resonated sound though, a bit simple imho.

Nice elements, but a bit repetetive.

2.25/5

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13-07-2004 11:21

djhixxx djhixxx is a male

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love the make up of the track, sounds a bit too digital for my taste but thats just me, but then it does suit the track, i think surya was right about the kick drum, could of been more realistic sounding, heavier hitting, i like the resonated sound but it sounds quite thin, could do with thickening up a little.
all in all i like the track. Pleased

3.5 / 5

14-07-2004 20:10

janverstichel janverstichel is a male

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downloading...
agree with surya about the kick
snare good
ghost snare's fit the track

not bad produced not a bad track but a bit dull loosed my attention costantly
3/5

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16-12-2004 15:55

spudleyq spudleyq is a male

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reminds me of a list of side effects i posted on here........hey.......i trademarked all those!!! Tongue

this doesn't sound too lethargic.......but i'll bear with you......very chilled.....not my kind of music.....and definitely not for the dancefloor......but it's still a good song!!

3.4 astronomical theories /5.6 einsteins!!

i don't mean to be a picky peter.......i just wanted to help you out.......the title should either be Lethargic State......or State of Lethargy........Lethargy State would only work if state was used in its provincial meaning rather than its "state of being" meaning....just thought i'd help ya out!!

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by spudleyq: 16-12-2004 17:33.

16-12-2004 17:28

Surora23 Surora23 is a male

Agressive Melodic Disorder

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hahaha thanks...ya i made this song when i frist started producing...my new sutff it hell of a lot better...plane and simple...thanks though!

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16-12-2004 17:35

Glim

Stuck In The Late Nineties

Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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i like the speed of it, good pace imo
mmm nice ghosting, makes the snare more bearable in succession
very atmospheric, wit da sonar sound
interseting downtempo beatz surora
lol, bouncy, this is so different to ur other tracks man, so much weaker imo, i know its not mastered but, well i guess i still can't get 'the shire' outta my fuckin head!!
snare is a bit weak but when the ghost hits come in they it sounds a little more fluent.

good structure-wise but it just lacks overall punch imo bro

look forward to the next chapter from you..

2.5/5

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17-12-2004 00:19

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