drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » aeLGoa - Da'bedoe'k aeLGoa - Da'bedoe'k Author Post aeLGoa psygoatriest Registration Date: 19-12-2009 Posts: 14 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Da'bedoe'k' and post your comments here! aah all hand-programmed beat, it was thinking this one belongs here a bit more than some of the others __ .::aeLGoa::. 11-11-2010 07:42 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  To many snares in the beat and it sounds empty, add some hihats. Organ loop doesn't fit in and it is too loud. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 11-11-2010 11:36 simage Simplicity is the key Registration Date: 19-03-2010 Posts: 239 Helpfulness rating:  Very experimental! I'm loving the beat, but the reese synth is a bit too normal to my taste. Also the change in the song at 1:35 is way too sudden. You have to build up to that change, but now it's like you made 2 completely different songs, and added them together. This one can use a lot more work I think. Big up on the beat though, I really like the beat __ 11-11-2010 12:51 freddy reeks break yo self foooo Registration Date: 10-02-2010 Posts: 145 Helpfulness rating:  The 1st half is different, lvls need som work and some notes clash here n there keep at that, the outro swich bit is just odd, prob best 2 take it out 11-11-2010 17:27 aeLGoa psygoatriest Registration Date: 19-12-2009 Posts: 14 Helpfulness rating:  some sound suggestions, there both parts were indeed conceived seperatally the synth is a bit mellow indeed but i dont want be a heavy song .. just yet ive made a lot of progress recently and i'd like to it to converge into some major project soon (on a "memes first" foundation)! __ .::aeLGoa::. 11-11-2010 19:41 pusha waveform molester Registration Date: 07-01-2010 Posts: 757 Helpfulness rating:  dont like the drums that synth that comes in sounds absolutely however this is better than your last song draek bart that was the worst choon i think ive ever heard noticed youve stopped using marachi breaks or whatever you called them this song is very very messy indeed and needs a lot of structural arrangement the second part of the song that just jumps in just isn't even conscevable as the same song and it sounds terrible i'm affraid i'm going to have to tick in the structure box awfull it jumps randomly from one part to the other __ buy the ticket take the ride 11-11-2010 23:39 amptek Jan Amparo Registration Date: 04-08-2010 Posts: 148 Helpfulness rating:  I like your ideas but it just doesnt fit what needs to be promoted here on .be Don't feel like we've disowned you in anyway if you keep up your experiments and fix up your tunes i'm sure someone will appreciate your work. Amptek 12-11-2010 22:49 SICKorWELL SICKorWELL DnB Registration Date: 24-09-2009 Posts: 120 Helpfulness rating:  not a bad tune every thing just sounds like it has alot of reverb on it could lay a bit back on it and add some more drums i would focus on the quality of the sounds and fx ur using. good idea out-trow comes in a bit loud as well. good idea keep it up __ ''Music is my life and DnB is my soul" free 320 downloads and mixes at www.myspace.com/sickorwell Artist info www.Pruvenmusic.com 13-11-2010 08:35 D0x ZA Producer Registration Date: 08-10-2008 Posts: 10 Drum are good in the beginning, the intro bassline sounds a bit off, not very tite and is confusing...I cant imagine dancing to this.. I get the feeling that I am waiting for a break that is never coming...1:29 sounds like the tune is doing something then it goes into something completely off key, you need to keep the tune consistent or else it throws off the listener like it is doing right now. Overall to be brutally honest I would not listen to this again.. you need to listen to other tunes to get an idea of how to put the different parts in a mix. Not impressed __ http://soundcloud.com/hey-zeus 25-12-2010 10:08 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » aeLGoa - Da'bedoe'k