Please check out my new track 'Dub Bananez- Try This- (feat. Stealth Avenger)' and post your comments here!
Here is a tune we worked on with "Stealth Avenger." The poem was written by him about a Indian girl that he fell in love with and had trouble letting go of after being separated from her. We were trying to make the tune a little more positive with the upbeat melodies even though it is a very sad situation. We wanted to show that it‘s possible to be happy when letting go. Enjoy.
Title: "Try This"
by "Stealth Avenger"
Saturday, March 21, 2009 at 12:29pm
Reaching me
deep down
deep down
like I could sleep now
and a see-saw
it sounds
I hear the count-down
a tick-tock
a bad joke like a 'knock-knock'
like, "do what?"
I 'popped' but then the clock stopped
under impressions
a second direction
no contest
for my expressions
I'm learning a lesson
through my stress
though I stretch
and I press
to forget
or get my mind outside of the time we met
even then
won't even let go
my inner feelings exposed
less like a throw back
more like a retro
I still like her chest though
(her eyes and her neck though)
her hips how they wisp make me wish I was that close
but that's closed
I can't go
back
I hear the fingers snap
and I slowly react
like the intro good sound all i think the vocals are over powered by the music in parts.i think the flutes the only thing that i think spoils it over than that a nice clear sound.
good tune just not feeling the little poly synth thing everything else sounds great good tune guys. i think it has a good grimyrolla feel lyrics are dope aswell. over all good tune.
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Originally posted by SICKorWELL
good tune just not feeling the little poly synth thing everything else sounds great good tune guys. i think it has a good grimyrolla feel lyrics are dope aswell. over all good tune.
