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freddy reeks 
break yo self foooo
Registration Date: 10-02-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Rags' and post your comments here!
I uploaded this 1 a while back, I think is pretty much finished now. Its def. better than it was anyways. What do ya think!
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06-11-2010 19:50 |
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Galeforce
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Registration Date: 07-11-2010
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Hi Freddy. I quite like the strings but the drum pattern was a bit basic for me. Perhaps some more detail (even at the end of each 4th bar) would have added some interest. That is just my opinion tho (I'm a bit anal about my drums!) and perhaps this is what you wanted for this track.
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07-11-2010 22:10 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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drums sound a bit dead, could use a break layered on top. Not a bad tune at all.
Keep 'm coming!
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08-11-2010 12:58 |
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GdZ
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Registration Date: 13-10-2010
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love the synths they are hiting my soul
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09-11-2010 13:45 |
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optikal_assassin
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Registration Date: 18-07-2005
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intro sounds nice. i like them synths you used, but the downer for me was when the drop came in. the drums sound kinda lifeless. like battledrone said, maybe layering up another break or just some ghost hats or something to give them a little more life. the breaks actually sound kinda too dry as well. maybe subtle saturation on them would help too.
synths are the strong point. they do seem kinda quiet compared to the drums though. maybe bringing them up front more would give the drums a different feel to.
not too shabby overall but really could use some more work to make it even more enjoyable to listen to.
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09-11-2010 20:42 |
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switchdnb
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Registration Date: 10-11-2010
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Like the intro could use that in a film. was not keen on drop and noticed also theres a few bass notes that dont fit together. been could do with more rythm and heaviness .could also do more on arrangements within parts of the track. make that snare with more of a slap.
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10-11-2010 22:52 |
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