 Pherro - Rampage |
Pherro 
Producer
Registration Date: 28-06-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Rampage' and post your comments here!
What's up DnB.be,
I started on this track with the idea to really up my game, working much more on EQing and mixing then I usually do. Turned out to be sort of a dark, industrial DnB track.
This is the second track I've uploaded here and I've really taken the feedback from Hades at heart.
Let me know what you all think!
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02-11-2010 02:58 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
Posts: 757
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intro sweep is very loud could do with equing a bit to take that harsh frequency out pad sounds like its up very loud and distorting slightly kick sounds good although gets a bit lost in the drop snare could do with a bit more low range power hats are ok there are a lot of good elements in the track but think you could do a little bit of rearrangement it is a little stiff soundin that xylophone in break down is a bit hard on the ears im only saying what im hearing i have this up pretty loud this is a massive improvement on your last track i have listed a few things here but they are only minor adjustments which i think if u do u can call this one finished , nice work
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02-11-2010 11:23 |
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Monkey Nut1
Destiny
Registration Date: 04-04-2010
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Nice intro, kept me interested, would of kept it going for a little longer though? Wasn't to keen on the drop at 0:44, but love the one's at 1:04 and 1:28, great work... Overall, nice track, dark and eerie, just how i like it, great use of samples, well done.
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02-11-2010 11:32 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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You really hit the poppy-industrial spot there.
There's a constant wobble in your mix which I don't think is intended. I've got the feeling it is a bit overcompressed, go easy on the compression.
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02-11-2010 12:07 |
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