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Noisebound Noisebound is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Noisebound - Reflections' and post your comments here!


This is my second track. Started making this at the beginning of the week. Please write what do you all think about it.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Noisebound: 31-10-2010 21:15.
31-10-2010 20:59
Glodaragz Glodaragz is a male
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I don't have time for big feedback.
So i think that snare is short, u should make it longer,or replace it with other one.It's really nice chill stuff.I like the wind effects.
And yes i want copy from this, if thats not a problem Smile
Big ups
4.8/5
31-10-2010 21:23 Homepage of Glodaragz
fogboy fogboy is a male
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This is a really good tune especially for your second tune everything is structured nice and sounds good. good work Smile
01-11-2010 10:26
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Snare is a bit too deep, it's missing a hi-end. Add a higher snare to cover that up. Good tune, lacks a bit of identity imo. A vocal or a unique hook could fix that easily.
Very good work!

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01-11-2010 16:20 Homepage of BattleDrone
optikal_assassin optikal_assassin is a male
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wow, really only your second tune? well, it sure as hell sounds a lot better than my second attempt at doing a track. definitely sounds like you're off to a damn good start. everything sounds pretty good. maybe a little more on the snare as others have mentioned, but beyond that, it's pretty good for me, especially as a second track. i'm kinda curious, but what did you use for your synthesizers? sounds like some FM but i kinda like the sound of it. really not much i can nitpick as i'm actually enjoying it more than trying to tear it apart. good job! Bigup

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01-11-2010 19:36
Noisebound Noisebound is a male
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Thanks for the feedbacks. I know that something is wrong with the snare, I've been replacing it hundreds of times, equalizing but i can't get the sound that i want...I thought about vocals too, but i don't know where to get good samples that would fit this track. I used FM 8 for some pads, Ableton operator, Albino 3 and of course Sampler Big Grin

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01-11-2010 20:13
optikal_assassin optikal_assassin is a male
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i thought it had that fm8 sound. i love the sounds of fm8. thanks for letting me know. Bigup

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01-11-2010 20:37
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Hey mate, thanks for your review on my 'strangers' track, nice one!!! This is a great track for a second attempt? I was expecting something a little darker after what you said about mine, lol... This is a really nice track, although not my cup of rosie. It has a great build and structure, wicked samples, you know your stuff, look forward to hearing more from you, keep it up...
02-11-2010 11:27
amptek amptek is a male
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Intro with the rim shots sound very nice and up until the drums come in it all fit well together. Nice sound and melody.

Nice drop, very smooth and not too much. Saw myself grooving to this with lights going, people around, good vibes and loud speakers.

Overall great tune can't really pin point much to fix or improve. Seems like you got the hang of structure. Keep it up man! I enjoyed this track very much.
02-11-2010 17:18 Homepage of amptek
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What ever is missing I believe it is trivial.
This song has good layered deep sound and it is well made in my opinion.

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28-11-2010 02:07
eurk0 eurk0 is a male
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doesnt sound like just your second track Smile thats a good thing. the snare could be brighter a bit. the track is not bad, but just a little bit unoriginal. anyway i like the little perc things which go all the way which are really panned to sides. the buildup is quite standard, but works well. the only thing was maybe the bar kinda fully filled with kicks. didnt like it that much. something little sublte would be better imho. all in all not bad, i see great potential in you, keep it up Wink

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28-11-2010 12:52
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